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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Section 3 - Part 1: Calling Card"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from emptypage
Oh, no! Not camp! camp is where the standoff will be, I'll bet.
Very tense chapter. Good write. I love Cody. I await the next installment. But I'[m worried...
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Oh, no! Not camp! camp is where the standoff will be, I'll bet.
Very tense chapter. Good write. I love Cody. I await the next installment. But I'[m worried...
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Cody is not very hard to love, is he?
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He is very lovable.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello again Bret: This is continuing to be an interesting story.
I don't agree though, that Cody should be sent away for 10 days, anywhere. I would keep him very close to me. It is too soon for this boy to be sent away but that's just my opinion.
Also it now seems that the Sheriff did not speak up at the dinner table to say that he also saw Earl Anthony Shroder and was threatened by him. Perhaps Cody was imagining the whole thing? But now they seem to be insinuating that maybe someone else was buried in the coffin at Earl's funeral. I just don't understand why the Sheriff didn't say that he saw Earl when he went to get Cody.
I guess I will find out as I contiunue to read this story so sill following.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hello again Bret: This is continuing to be an interesting story.
I don't agree though, that Cody should be sent away for 10 days, anywhere. I would keep him very close to me. It is too soon for this boy to be sent away but that's just my opinion.
Also it now seems that the Sheriff did not speak up at the dinner table to say that he also saw Earl Anthony Shroder and was threatened by him. Perhaps Cody was imagining the whole thing? But now they seem to be insinuating that maybe someone else was buried in the coffin at Earl's funeral. I just don't understand why the Sheriff didn't say that he saw Earl when he went to get Cody.
I guess I will find out as I contiunue to read this story so sill following.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from country ranch writer
With his real father on the loose make for a very awkward relation ship with the sherif and it is going to come to a head when and if they do meet as Cody is number one on his mind
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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With his real father on the loose make for a very awkward relation ship with the sherif and it is going to come to a head when and if they do meet as Cody is number one on his mind
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Smiles
Comment from Rasmine
Hello,
The last comment went way over my head. But maybe -- he took something that made his body look dead but not really, like when Cody took the ketchup and salt, it wouldn't be real tomato soup but look like it?
Have a good week.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hello,
The last comment went way over my head. But maybe -- he took something that made his body look dead but not really, like when Cody took the ketchup and salt, it wouldn't be real tomato soup but look like it?
Have a good week.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Appreciate the guess.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
I always like to read the stories about Cody. They are very interesting.
You are wonderful at writing stories and books. I enjoy reading them.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
I always like to read the stories about Cody. They are very interesting.
You are wonderful at writing stories and books. I enjoy reading them.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Brett. That scene in the Italian restaurant made me hungry. Love a good pasta. So we don't know if the Earl character is dead or alive. I thought it strange that Cody would suggest he dig up the casket. Shows a little maturity in thinking. This is a well written chapter with enough details to leave a reader following the story ready for the next chapter. Nicely done! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett. That scene in the Italian restaurant made me hungry. Love a good pasta. So we don't know if the Earl character is dead or alive. I thought it strange that Cody would suggest he dig up the casket. Shows a little maturity in thinking. This is a well written chapter with enough details to leave a reader following the story ready for the next chapter. Nicely done! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
That's what I want to know is about his death. Cant wait to see what sheriff does next to help Cody and if his dad will get his hands on him again or go for someone else
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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That's what I want to know is about his death. Cant wait to see what sheriff does next to help Cody and if his dad will get his hands on him again or go for someone else
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Comment from Possummagic
I've read some of your work before and I enjoy the easy way it flows. I like to read each part of your story so... keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. Good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I've read some of your work before and I enjoy the easy way it flows. I like to read each part of your story so... keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. Good luck.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Thank you I will.
