Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1004 "haiku (robin sings and chirps)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from BOO ghost
Tiny tenor. Nice. Played sax in high school band. There is the alto saxophone, tenor and baritone saz. Alto is the high range. tenor is medium and baritone is low tones. Like the ambient noises, the birds. Nice haiku here. How long do BOO has to post this challenge? if not too late would love to post one.
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Tiny tenor. Nice. Played sax in high school band. There is the alto saxophone, tenor and baritone saz. Alto is the high range. tenor is medium and baritone is low tones. Like the ambient noises, the birds. Nice haiku here. How long do BOO has to post this challenge? if not too late would love to post one.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and the six stars, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
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Got home. My mom will be coming from hospital soon. yeah, had had luck in that hospital. getting stuck in an elevator done a job on my nerves.
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I am sorry to hear that :(
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Back home from hospital with mom. Need a days sleep... see you in The Twilight Zone! Too late for me to post in haiku club, right?
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No it's not too late :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I can hear the robin sing and you are so perfectly spot on with the imagery leading to the perfect line of the tiny tenor.
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I can hear the robin sing and you are so perfectly spot on with the imagery leading to the perfect line of the tiny tenor.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind.
gypsy
Comment from pipersfancy
I "clicked" and when the automatic sounds of birds began, all three of my pet felines came dashing into the room! It was quite funny to see, thought I'd share!
I have a large silver maple out my back door, and I often sit on my patio with a cup of coffee in the morning... sounds just as you've described in your haiku!
Regards,
pf
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I "clicked" and when the automatic sounds of birds began, all three of my pet felines came dashing into the room! It was quite funny to see, thought I'd share!
I have a large silver maple out my back door, and I often sit on my patio with a cup of coffee in the morning... sounds just as you've described in your haiku!
Regards,
pf
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind.
gypsy
Comment from krys123
Cheers, Gypsy;
-you've outdone yourself with this one, Gypsy, and created an essence of spring in nature.
-With the beautiful bird sounds in the background that it exults your haiku with two grammatically connected and demonstratively descriptive lines which create a visual expressiveness.
-I just love the alliteration in your satori when you write "tiny tenor" which cultivates an aha moment within your haiku and especially exceeds in describing your conceptual theme so perfectly.
-Great picture that also supports and is so relative to your haiku and its meaning.
-You are very good at what you do and that is haiku.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
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Cheers, Gypsy;
-you've outdone yourself with this one, Gypsy, and created an essence of spring in nature.
-With the beautiful bird sounds in the background that it exults your haiku with two grammatically connected and demonstratively descriptive lines which create a visual expressiveness.
-I just love the alliteration in your satori when you write "tiny tenor" which cultivates an aha moment within your haiku and especially exceeds in describing your conceptual theme so perfectly.
-Great picture that also supports and is so relative to your haiku and its meaning.
-You are very good at what you do and that is haiku.
-Thank you for sharing and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind. I really appreciate the six stars.
gypsy
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You're very good, Gypsy, picture specialty of haiku.
It's enjoyable to read the good ones. ;~}
Alex
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
A beautiful Haiku my friend,
Flows brilliantly with the most delightful last line.
. tiny tenor fits the description of this wonderful bird so well
Mitchell
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A beautiful Haiku my friend,
Flows brilliantly with the most delightful last line.
. tiny tenor fits the description of this wonderful bird so well
Mitchell
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind.
gypsy
Comment from Sis Cat
As a person who loves to sing and listen to the robins sing at dawn, I found your poem to be delightful. It is vivid and . . . what is that I hear? I can even hear robins. The soloist at church described me as being a tenor, so I love your satori. You capture the early moment joy of nature, life, and all of creation awakening.
Thank you for sharing a most relaxing and refreshing poem.
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As a person who loves to sing and listen to the robins sing at dawn, I found your poem to be delightful. It is vivid and . . . what is that I hear? I can even hear robins. The soloist at church described me as being a tenor, so I love your satori. You capture the early moment joy of nature, life, and all of creation awakening.
Thank you for sharing a most relaxing and refreshing poem.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind. I really appreciate the six stars and exceptional review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha...
I thought at first this read "tiny terror" and I was like, 'Wha-a-a...?'
But, I finally came to my senses (what few I have left) and realized that it simply couldn't be; it made no sense.
Turns out that I was right after all.
Chalk one up for me, Y-a-a-a-ayyyyy!
The addition of birdsong was a nice touch as well. It gives the entire haiku a very serene, peaceful feel.
A feeling of "zen", if you will.
Well done, Gypsy Sensei.An excellent addition to the book.
Sayonara,
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Hahaha...
I thought at first this read "tiny terror" and I was like, 'Wha-a-a...?'
But, I finally came to my senses (what few I have left) and realized that it simply couldn't be; it made no sense.
Turns out that I was right after all.
Chalk one up for me, Y-a-a-a-ayyyyy!
The addition of birdsong was a nice touch as well. It gives the entire haiku a very serene, peaceful feel.
A feeling of "zen", if you will.
Well done, Gypsy Sensei.An excellent addition to the book.
Sayonara,
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind. I always look forward to your unique and personalized reviews. Thank you for the six stars. :)
gypsy hugs
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It's always my pleasure, MariVal. You're more than welcome.
Comment from Hitcher
Ha, this one made me smile friend, a very clever musical take on the beauty of the tiny tenor welcoming in the glory of a new day while perched in the Mapel. I love that you didn't attach any accompanying art because your words and bird song conjure beautiful images in my mind's eye... very nice Gypsy!!
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Ha, this one made me smile friend, a very clever musical take on the beauty of the tiny tenor welcoming in the glory of a new day while perched in the Mapel. I love that you didn't attach any accompanying art because your words and bird song conjure beautiful images in my mind's eye... very nice Gypsy!!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind. Thank you very much for the six stars and exceptional review.
gypsy hugs
Comment from zanya
One of Nature's very special moments - song of the tiny robin, at the dawn of a new day, captured so eloquently here with alliterative inlay in this Haiku
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One of Nature's very special moments - song of the tiny robin, at the dawn of a new day, captured so eloquently here with alliterative inlay in this Haiku
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much my friend, you are very kind. Thank you very much for the six stars and exceptional review.
gypsy
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Gypsy;
what a lovely presentation. The background effects made me think my window was open! (I don't have my speakers turned up very loud.)
The haiku was wonderful. I was able to discern both the 'kigo' and 'satori' clearly. I'm getting better!
~patty~
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Hi Gypsy;
what a lovely presentation. The background effects made me think my window was open! (I don't have my speakers turned up very loud.)
The haiku was wonderful. I was able to discern both the 'kigo' and 'satori' clearly. I'm getting better!
~patty~
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
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Thank you very much for the six stars and exceptional review.
gypsy
