Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1004 "haiku (robin sings and chirps)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
The sound of birds singing always makes me very happy, Gypsy. I thought this was a lovely enhancement to your haiku. Perhaps you could even leave out 'and chirps'?Great images, and Satori, Giddy
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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The sound of birds singing always makes me very happy, Gypsy. I thought this was a lovely enhancement to your haiku. Perhaps you could even leave out 'and chirps'?Great images, and Satori, Giddy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, I loved this beautiful haiku. The imagery is amazing and the satori just sets it all off for me. I love the robin, one of my favourite birds. We have quite a few of them here in the winter time. A great addition to the book. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hola Gitana, I loved this beautiful haiku. The imagery is amazing and the satori just sets it all off for me. I love the robin, one of my favourite birds. We have quite a few of them here in the winter time. A great addition to the book. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hola, Ulla,
Gracias, mi amiga. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from MizKat
Hi Gypsy,
You always write such wonderful things. I always look forward to reading them. They are always interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Kat
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hi Gypsy,
You always write such wonderful things. I always look forward to reading them. They are always interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Kat
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy
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Hi Gypsy. It was nice to read and review your haiku poem. Kat
Comment from dragonpoet
This tiny tenor sure has a voice that carries. I like the strong image given in these few words. No artwork needed here. I always enjoy your haikus.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This tiny tenor sure has a voice that carries. I like the strong image given in these few words. No artwork needed here. I always enjoy your haikus.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy
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No problem, Gypsy.
Joan
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
lol... Tiny terror? lol. A very nice little piece about one of the birds I'd really like to see. I've never seen one.
You are the best at these and I applaud you.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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G'day mate.
lol... Tiny terror? lol. A very nice little piece about one of the birds I'd really like to see. I've never seen one.
You are the best at these and I applaud you.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 15-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ric Myworld
We had better enjoy all those calling birds for as long as we can. Old man winter will soon be on it's way, and then, we will be sitting wishing for the dreary weather to end and the the birds to come singing again. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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We had better enjoy all those calling birds for as long as we can. Old man winter will soon be on it's way, and then, we will be sitting wishing for the dreary weather to end and the the birds to come singing again. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy
Comment from JW
Thanks for sharing your work. I found it quite interesting.
With your poem, you've included a sound track of birds chirping and singing.
At first, I looked outside to see if the sound was coming from there. Of course, it wasn't since it's mid-evening here.
Even more interesting was the fact the sound even fooled my dog; he immediately started barking the second he heard it. :-) JW
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Thanks for sharing your work. I found it quite interesting.
With your poem, you've included a sound track of birds chirping and singing.
At first, I looked outside to see if the sound was coming from there. Of course, it wasn't since it's mid-evening here.
Even more interesting was the fact the sound even fooled my dog; he immediately started barking the second he heard it. :-) JW
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy
Comment from Joan E.
You captured a lovely scene along with the sound effects in this haiku. I enjoyed your alliteration of ''s's" and "t's" that echoed the song. Smiles from Glacier Bay, Alaska- Joan
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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You captured a lovely scene along with the sound effects in this haiku. I enjoyed your alliteration of ''s's" and "t's" that echoed the song. Smiles from Glacier Bay, Alaska- Joan
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is beautifully written using 17 syllables this must be a beautiful sight to witness and hear well done again I enjoyed the presentation perfect regards Jill
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is beautifully written using 17 syllables this must be a beautiful sight to witness and hear well done again I enjoyed the presentation perfect regards Jill
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Sister. Ohhhh this one is so quietly soothing to this reader. I hear the tiny sounds of pleasure and the restraint in accomplishing so much joy. Nice one Sister. xoxo d
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hello Sister. Ohhhh this one is so quietly soothing to this reader. I hear the tiny sounds of pleasure and the restraint in accomplishing so much joy. Nice one Sister. xoxo d
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my haiku. Thank you :)
Gypsy hugs
