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Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Section 2 - Part 5: Ghost Sighting"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from BOO ghost
BOO's favorite paragraph: Cody smelled the dirt he walked on. Every bush he encountered cast an eerie shadow in the bright, star-filled West Texas sky. He feared Earl Anthony Schroder lurked behind each one of them. Home would be a safe haven, but he could not risk luring the beast he avoided there. Nor could he jeopardize those he loved. Cody never felt so alone in his life. He pressed on.
Well done,mate. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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BOO's favorite paragraph: Cody smelled the dirt he walked on. Every bush he encountered cast an eerie shadow in the bright, star-filled West Texas sky. He feared Earl Anthony Schroder lurked behind each one of them. Home would be a safe haven, but he could not risk luring the beast he avoided there. Nor could he jeopardize those he loved. Cody never felt so alone in his life. He pressed on.
Well done,mate. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello Bret, Good morning:
Okay now, don't you think for a minute that I am not going to ask you, "Whay in the Hell didn't the Sheriff, Cody's dad just shoot the disgusting creep? Why would he just let him walk off threatening them both as he went?"
Oh h___ no! He is the Sheriff and this is his son who has been extremely abused in every way and kept away from his parents for years. Even the very sight of the bruises on his face should have been enough to sen the Sheriff into a crazed madness but then this creep arrives and starts to threaten the Sheriff and his son and tells him he is not man enough to kill him. Okay I am going to give you the benefit of the doubt.
You will probably say that the Sheriff did not want to deal with him until he got his son safely home but I will be following to see that the Sheriff gets justice for his son Cody.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Hello Bret, Good morning:
Okay now, don't you think for a minute that I am not going to ask you, "Whay in the Hell didn't the Sheriff, Cody's dad just shoot the disgusting creep? Why would he just let him walk off threatening them both as he went?"
Oh h___ no! He is the Sheriff and this is his son who has been extremely abused in every way and kept away from his parents for years. Even the very sight of the bruises on his face should have been enough to sen the Sheriff into a crazed madness but then this creep arrives and starts to threaten the Sheriff and his son and tells him he is not man enough to kill him. Okay I am going to give you the benefit of the doubt.
You will probably say that the Sheriff did not want to deal with him until he got his son safely home but I will be following to see that the Sheriff gets justice for his son Cody.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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Earl Anthony Schroder is Cody's biological father.
The abuse Cody suffered was while he lived with Earl Anthony Schroder in Palo Pinto before he came to Astatula and was adopted by Sheriff Daniels.
If the Sheriff had shot Earl Anthony Schroder in that situation it would have been murder, since Earl Anthony Schroder was unarmed.
Had Schroder committed a crime? Yes, assault.
Should Sheriff Daniels have apprehended him? Yes, but in that situation it would have made for a very short book.
Glad you are following this story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Thank you Bret for clearing up all the misunderstanding. Now I am starting to really get it. Yes, I will continue to follow the story.
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Games Have Just Begun!"
"Ha, ha, Ha!"
"As he disappears in to a crevice!"
"I thought in an "Earlier Piece," Earl had been killed?"
"Dead?"
"That this whole "Earl Anthony Schroder Thing" was the kid's active pain and imagination?"
"Clue me in!"
"Nice, liked the cruelty Level to the child."
"But, kind a creepy...
DR. Rick!
DR. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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"The Games Have Just Begun!"
"Ha, ha, Ha!"
"As he disappears in to a crevice!"
"I thought in an "Earlier Piece," Earl had been killed?"
"Dead?"
"That this whole "Earl Anthony Schroder Thing" was the kid's active pain and imagination?"
"Clue me in!"
"Nice, liked the cruelty Level to the child."
"But, kind a creepy...
DR. Rick!
DR. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from emptypage
Excellent chapter. Taut, gripping. The story moved forward. Again, you surprised me. I was sure this bad guy would hurt the Sheriff or get to Cody before the Sheriff did.
I'll be awaiting the next installment. No nits.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Excellent chapter. Taut, gripping. The story moved forward. Again, you surprised me. I was sure this bad guy would hurt the Sheriff or get to Cody before the Sheriff did.
I'll be awaiting the next installment. No nits.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
In the background part of your story in the first part of it and the last line it should say: He knew IF the chances were real good he wouldn't. The
rest of what you've written is wonderful and I really enjoyed reading it.
I will be looking forward to more of you great work.
Kat
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
In the background part of your story in the first part of it and the last line it should say: He knew IF the chances were real good he wouldn't. The
rest of what you've written is wonderful and I really enjoyed reading it.
I will be looking forward to more of you great work.
Kat
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Appreciate the catch.
Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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I will keep reading your work. You are
wonderful at writing it. I always enjoy it
too. Kat
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
OH wow this chapter was very well written and an excellent addition to the work. It takes the challenge on to another level and more to come.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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OH wow this chapter was very well written and an excellent addition to the work. It takes the challenge on to another level and more to come.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your kind reviews, comments, and support.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from BeasPeas
This chapter is very well written, Brett. I think this is the first time I've read any of them on Cody, but what I have read here is interesting and top-notch. The image of Cody is adorable. Great choice for the focus of your story. Marilyn
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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This chapter is very well written, Brett. I think this is the first time I've read any of them on Cody, but what I have read here is interesting and top-notch. The image of Cody is adorable. Great choice for the focus of your story. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from apky
I think I did check in on this story often enough not to miss a post. But I'm not sure now because I find myself "on" Cody instead of Brandon, where I'd started the read. Is this a separate story from that of Brandon or do they conjoin at some stage?
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I think I did check in on this story often enough not to miss a post. But I'm not sure now because I find myself "on" Cody instead of Brandon, where I'd started the read. Is this a separate story from that of Brandon or do they conjoin at some stage?
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Cody is always a separate story from anything else I write.
I will return to Brandon's story as well very shortly.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Rasmine
I have a question, Brett. I thought that the antagonist was dead. I know I didn't read the first few chapters and probably won't now, but just wondering.
Take care, and have a good week.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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I have a question, Brett. I thought that the antagonist was dead. I know I didn't read the first few chapters and probably won't now, but just wondering.
Take care, and have a good week.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
That is answered in the next chapter.
So, I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sankey
Good seeing this back. I thought his excrement father had died? Good reading. I hope he was dreaming. Very graphic throughout.Keep up the good work. No spags. Thanks again.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Good seeing this back. I thought his excrement father had died? Good reading. I hope he was dreaming. Very graphic throughout.Keep up the good work. No spags. Thanks again.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
