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I had a dream

A dream about the sister we loved and lost

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Comment from mediumhead
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Wow this is fantastic, the grief is raw and true and yet the hope is equally abundant. I am not sure if this was a dream, it feels like she was giving a message. I cant comprehend losing my sister and a dream like this would be such a comfort. I was really 'in' this dream. Thank you

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
    It was a dream as her anniversary was only recent and so she's been on my mind. I had tears pouring down my face as I wrote this. This very special lady was my best friend, my sister in law who was my sister. We met as teenagers, my brothers childhood sweetheart and we lost her to Melanoma at the age of 53, nine years ago. I am in awe of the emotions that grip me when I talk about her at times. I loved her so much. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Interesting dream recaptured in this presentation.

Sure she would have appreciated it.

Never easy losing someone too young and that close to you regardless of how the loss occurred.

 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your feedback. She was just an ordinary woman who we loved very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a clear visual pictorial word painting of a dream fashioned more than paying a tribute to a sixteen year old sister, memories of love and environment came repeatedly in dreams; I liked.

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
    Perhaps I should clarify that. In my dream she appears to me as a 16 year old, which was her age when she met my brother. She passed away at aged 53 after a short battle with Melanoma. I met her when I was aged 15 and she was more a sister than a sister in law. I refer to her as my sister. Thank you for your feedback.