Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very good acrostic entry for the contest, Analie.
While each season is vividly and graphically depicted, I especially enjoyed the emphasis you placed on specific words indicating motion in the last line of each stanza. Gathering, repeated x 2, along with growing, falling and waiting...
Excellent writing.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thank you for the thoughtful review! I am so pleased that you understood the reason for the repeated words in the last sentence of each stanza! Thank you ...

reply by Dean Kuch on 07-Aug-2017

You are more than welcome. :)

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Great descriptiveness and feeling engendered in this well written piece. I like that you've covered the entirety of the seasons too.

Unfurling, day by day, it's ardour - its (no apostrophe for possession with it).



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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017

Thank you for the lovely review! And .... drat! ... didn't see that mistake. Thanks for catching it and pointing it out to me.

Just discovered this site. It is so much fun! Thanks again.