As the Sun Sets - letter S
Lots of Alliteration Entry13 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I know one thing following the requirements must of been difficult.
I will say you did very well with all the various rules I found a real good and sad ending
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
Hello author
I know one thing following the requirements must of been difficult.
I will say you did very well with all the various rules I found a real good and sad ending
Gert
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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I appreciate your taking the time to read and review this effort of mine. It was a challenge, but a fun one.
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Hello author you are so welcome
Gert
Comment from rjuselius
wow and bravo! you have definitely achieved the requirements of this contest dear anonymous! i love the letter you have chosen and made it into a lighthearted piece of poetry!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
wow and bravo! you have definitely achieved the requirements of this contest dear anonymous! i love the letter you have chosen and made it into a lighthearted piece of poetry!
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comments. It was a challenge, but a fun one.
Comment from nbonner
This was very well written. The way the story made sense even with sticking with letter "s". I was sad towards the end knowing the "wedding" never took place. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
This was very well written. The way the story made sense even with sticking with letter "s". I was sad towards the end knowing the "wedding" never took place. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Your positive feedback made the challenge worthwhile!