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Three Words In A Poem Contest Entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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This is a terrific contender for the contest. It uses the words perfectly to describe what you don't like and, therefore, what you do like--humor. Colorful and playful without dwelling on the meaning of scary words. A special plus by not using them to a politically charged bash. Marilyn

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Marilyn, for your very insightful comments.
Comment from ARKent
Excellent
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I laughed at loud!! Way to be a rebel, I love it!!

Your poem is saucy, sarcastic and the rhyming is perfect. And I especially love that you took the contest to your own meaning: just because it says to include the words, it doesn't mean the words have to have meaning in the poem. An artist after my own heart. Yay!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    Yay here, too. I can't imagine a better review!...or couldn't, if not for an unfortunate newbie mistake.

    As you will come to know, Ashley, a grade of fewer than five stars is considered unfavorable by FS writers, except for beginners whose work needs constructive criticism. Fortunately, it's easy to revise a review by revisiting the poem and editing your comments. Upgrading is limited to five stars, and no downgrading is permitted.

    Now, how could I know your actual name, AR? ;)

    I'm very pleased to meet you.

    (By FS rules, I'm required to remain anonymous until the voting booth for the contest entry you reviewed is closed.)



reply by ARKent on 03-Aug-2017
    Ah, my mistake. I'll change that mark straight away!
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    I had no doubt about that. You had no way of knowing it was a mistake, being an ingenue here, and all. Let's get back to "Yay!"
Comment from Curly Girly
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This droll poem was funny!
Great lines:
We'll, I've complied with the prompt, and the committee can't bitch.
Putting those pesky words in the first line, worked with no hitch.
Yeah! Sock it to them!

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
    Thanks again, Curly. It's a pleasure to please you again!