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A typical day2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"A Typical Day writing Contest Entry."
"You described a day in the life of a "Fictional Character."
"Flowed well, read well, with no Grammar issues.
"Adjective Content was excellent."
"Objective Content , perfect."
"Descriptive Measures wonderful."
"Complete Synopsis-*****
"Good luck with this."
Dr. Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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"A Typical Day writing Contest Entry."
"You described a day in the life of a "Fictional Character."
"Flowed well, read well, with no Grammar issues.
"Adjective Content was excellent."
"Objective Content , perfect."
"Descriptive Measures wonderful."
"Complete Synopsis-*****
"Good luck with this."
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from RodG
Fun to see how a single day becomes tech free for awhile. I like how the speaker spends it before the neighbor interrupts. Great closing line.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Fun to see how a single day becomes tech free for awhile. I like how the speaker spends it before the neighbor interrupts. Great closing line.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Great review -thanks for reading zanya
