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Going To The Doctors Office

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written short story you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and the art work you chose for this went well. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
    Thank you kindly
Comment from Sis Cat
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Your hundred words or less story about a typical day for a cancer patient reminded me of relatives who underwent the same treatment.

We must play the waiting game when we arrive. After finally being called he gets ready for his treatment, First they take vials of blood to see what his readings are before mixing his meds for the chemo treatment.

Your story is short and to the point and implies in the closing lines that this typical day will repeat itself at the next chemo treatment. Your flash fiction story is like the film "Groundhog Day."

Thank you for sharing. I wish you contest success.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
    Thank you for your kind support
Comment from way2gokevs
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A typical day when one has a medical problem is a waiting game.
Nice story, hope it all goes well for you.
Good luck in the competition.
Regards.
Kev.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017
    Thank you for your kind support