Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Lanturne about your husband and the magical effect he has on you when he draws you into his bright blue eyes you are lost but can know you are safe.

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you for the lovely review of this poem,

~patty~

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Love has the reputation
Of being blind
Fulfilling dreams
Doom to fail
This is very well written with a interesting flow of words, making for a good read. There is good imagery.

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 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Charlie; yes, love can be fickle. I'm just glad we have worked through so much and managed to stay together for so long,

~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 28-Jul-2017

I answered this.