Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Awww... I think I'm jealous. How romantic. You're so lucky to have found a man like that. And a good looker too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Hi Cindy; I am lucky - and count my blessings every day; Thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Well I must say Patty: You and your husband are two very good looking people. I take it you saw my recent couple picture that I posted, "Hopeless but Hopeful Love." I think that you and I are of the rare few who are not afraid to post pictures of ourselves and our family members.

I love it that you have dedicated this post to this photo of your husband. Wow he is handsome and you deserve it because you are beautiful and I love your choice of words for your photo. ADMIRABLE. I am so happy that you are so happily married, you really deserve this also.

I will soon be posting my anniversary poem, when I slow down. I will mention then how gorgeous I feel that my husband is.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017

Hi Tier; thank you so much for reading AND for the wonderful compliments about my hubby, me and my writing.

Yes, we are generous in sharing our lives here, and I think that says a lot about who we are AND how we feel about ourselves,

~patty~

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Hello my friend I must say this is very beautiful and romantic sorry I am behind again I will catch up promise well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017

Hi Jill; thank you so much for the lovely review.

~patty~

Comment from Bucketlist

Excellent

Nice looking hubby! Kind face, feeling safe is a good place to be......lucky you!!!
Thanks for sharing family matter. It's obviously trending by your review #s.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Trisha;
thank you so much for reading my thoughts on my hubby. He is indeed my safe place,

~patty~

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Jul-2017

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Jul-2017

Well deserved after a young negative history. I'm happy for you

reply by Bucketlist on 30-Jul-2017

Well deserved after a young negative history. I'm happy for you

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

What a lovely tribute to your hubby, Patty
A beautiful five line poem, which I'm sure he would love.
An excellent Lanturne poem contest entry.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Mitchell; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem,

~patty~

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A sweet and romantic five-line poem for the contest. I think this an excellent Lanturne poem with a beautiful sentiment.

Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Janet; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your Lanturne poem is in perfect form. It is a nice tribute to the person it is written for - your husband?

Good luck in the contest Patty:)

teresa

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Teresa; yup, the poem is for my hubby. That's him in the picture - though it is thirty years ago - before the gray took over his beard.

Thank you for stopping by to read and review,

~patty~

Comment from dovemarie

Excellent

Dear patty, good lanturne poem. The blue background goes well with your lines "in your bright blue eyes." Good luck in the contest. I'm glad you have someone with whom you can feel "safe." Dove

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi dove; yes, I'm so lucky to have come through all the crap in my early years, and find someone who makes me feel safe. Luckily, he's been here for thirty four years. It hasn't always been smooth sailing - mostly because of my insecurities and trust issues - but the past five years has been heaven.

Thank you so much for your time to read and review,

~patty~

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

Lost
In your
Bright blue eyes
With you I am
Safe

these few words speak volumes, Patty - and he has lovely eyes.

I always go for the eyes (and the tight butt) - my Colin has dark chocolate eyes and the rest - ha ha.

Margaret

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Margaret; hee hee. Thank you so much for your review and comments. I'm still laughing,

~patty~

Comment from apky

Excellent

He looks yummy, my friend, although beards are not for me personally. But the blue eyes are adorable and honest. And the smile...

Well you know I'm not much of a poet, so I can't comment much on the rhymes and syllables and that sort of thing. So the five goes to both your words and those blue eyes.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2017

Hi Aki; thank you! If I could only write passionate scenes like you do, I could really tell some stories about the passion behind those eyes. I will just have the treasure the standing ovation we got from neighbors when we had an amorous afternoon one day. Unfortunately, the open bedroom windows let out the um...sounds.

~patty~

reply by apky on 30-Jul-2017

I can imagine...