Winter-scape in Blue
After a big storm beauty abounds.38 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your blue contest poem "Winter scape in blue". You painted a very descriptive story and chose an appropriate photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your blue contest poem "Winter scape in blue". You painted a very descriptive story and chose an appropriate photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed "Winter-scape," Marybell. Thank you for sharing and your kind praise.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted a blue picture here and there was no need for art to create the atmosphere, I can see shades of blue colour here, best of luck with the poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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You painted a blue picture here and there was no need for art to create the atmosphere, I can see shades of blue colour here, best of luck with the poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed "Winter-scape in Blue," Dolly. Thanks for sharing and your best wishes.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
I have been up north during one of these and you truly captured the feel and the 'blueness' of the scene. Excellent flow and ABCB rhyme pattern. Very strong entry
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I have been up north during one of these and you truly captured the feel and the 'blueness' of the scene. Excellent flow and ABCB rhyme pattern. Very strong entry
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Barb, for sharing "Winter-scape" and your kind praise.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Winter-scape in Blue, personifies the cold in the best way it can be sensed, as a ferocious, fanged creature ripping at the protection that keeps us safe. The rest of the poem calms us down and ends with a hopeful smoke from a warm shelter. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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This poem, Winter-scape in Blue, personifies the cold in the best way it can be sensed, as a ferocious, fanged creature ripping at the protection that keeps us safe. The rest of the poem calms us down and ends with a hopeful smoke from a warm shelter. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I really like how you interpreted "Winter-scape," Bill. Thanks for sharing.
Comment from emptypage
It's really interesting, but I've always found winter to look as if it is tinged with blue, and your poem put that very thing right out there as a possibility, or even reality. I enjoyed this. It even made me cold for a minute or two!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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It's really interesting, but I've always found winter to look as if it is tinged with blue, and your poem put that very thing right out there as a possibility, or even reality. I enjoyed this. It even made me cold for a minute or two!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Sorry my poem gave you chills for a moment, but thank yo for sharing "Winter-scape."
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
This poem was truly wonderful, a lovely density of sound, a subtlety of imagery, and a surreal connection of visions through a musical journey of winter delight.
Excellent patterns of resonance are used to create just the right amount of language to set this beautiful picture.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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This poem was truly wonderful, a lovely density of sound, a subtlety of imagery, and a surreal connection of visions through a musical journey of winter delight.
Excellent patterns of resonance are used to create just the right amount of language to set this beautiful picture.
Mitchell
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell, for sharing my poem and your kind praise.
Comment from royowen
An excellent work, the background colour is perfect for the poem. The soft, pale blue of a winter's sky, is exactly the colour where I live. The work is skilfully crafted in smooth flowing verse. In iambic tetrameter, and and abcb rjuming, expressive and decriptively image generating, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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An excellent work, the background colour is perfect for the poem. The soft, pale blue of a winter's sky, is exactly the colour where I live. The work is skilfully crafted in smooth flowing verse. In iambic tetrameter, and and abcb rjuming, expressive and decriptively image generating, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing "Winter-scape" and your kind praise.
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Most welcome
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
I like how you start out your poem with a simile
( telling the reader the storm were life starving wolves) and how you brought out the beauty of snow describing the different hues of blue are wonderfully described ex
The turquoise sky, horizon met
as snow-globe shaken flakes still fell.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hello author
I like how you start out your poem with a simile
( telling the reader the storm were life starving wolves) and how you brought out the beauty of snow describing the different hues of blue are wonderfully described ex
The turquoise sky, horizon met
as snow-globe shaken flakes still fell.
Gert
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I am so delighted you enjoyed "Winter-scape," Gert. Thank you for your very kind praise.
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You are welcome You got my vote.
Gert
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Thank you for your endorsement, Gert.
Comment from sharonlshelley
nice poem nice to read and very interesting, the picture is a lovely reflection on your work, good luck in the competition, and thanks for sharing. Sharon
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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nice poem nice to read and very interesting, the picture is a lovely reflection on your work, good luck in the competition, and thanks for sharing. Sharon
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your comments on "Winter-scape," Sharon, and your best wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the color blue. A very cold winter's night and a fierce snow storm over night leaves a fairy take landscape of snow in different shades of blue.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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A very well-written poem about the color blue. A very cold winter's night and a fierce snow storm over night leaves a fairy take landscape of snow in different shades of blue.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed my poem, Sandra. Thank you for sharing "Winter-scape" and your kind praise.
