Perennials of War
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Comment from c_lucas
Shakespeare was a man of many words
Ask him the time and he would give you an answer in an hour of so.
In "Caesar" he put chimneys on houses when the didn't exist
Over all, I liked his work.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Shakespeare was a man of many words
Ask him the time and he would give you an answer in an hour of so.
In "Caesar" he put chimneys on houses when the didn't exist
Over all, I liked his work.
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Sasha
Excellent work with this chapter. By using King Lear you are relating more of Shana's personality. I loved King Lear, that was one of my favorites. I hope you are having a great time and try not to worry about responding to our reviews. We will understand.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Excellent work with this chapter. By using King Lear you are relating more of Shana's personality. I loved King Lear, that was one of my favorites. I hope you are having a great time and try not to worry about responding to our reviews. We will understand.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for noticing that. This post will play an important role later. Not everybody has caught it. HMMM, thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I see how Shana mind seem to be thinking about her relationship with her father;
now is that why she is reading the story about King Lear
relationship with his three daughters is compared with her relationship with her Father?
Gert
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hello Barb
I see how Shana mind seem to be thinking about her relationship with her father;
now is that why she is reading the story about King Lear
relationship with his three daughters is compared with her relationship with her Father?
Gert
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I think Shana is thinking about her father and it will become much more prevalent as part of this story. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome Barb
Shanna must beat at this is confused and wants to make all well
Gert
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Barbara. Whenever I find myself in your neck of the woods, I'm always assured a fine read full of great characters, an actual plot and story. Your reads seem natural and are very clear. I like this chapter although I only caught a glimpse of the actual story. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hello Barbara. Whenever I find myself in your neck of the woods, I'm always assured a fine read full of great characters, an actual plot and story. Your reads seem natural and are very clear. I like this chapter although I only caught a glimpse of the actual story. Well done. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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The information in this post will be very important later. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
You have built silent dram with sharp suspense. I was thinking about something I watched this morning on TV about Shindler and his Tomb. The man was the only Nazi buried within Israeli walls. You made your characters to blend with history. Well done as always. Best to you Barbara.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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You have built silent dram with sharp suspense. I was thinking about something I watched this morning on TV about Shindler and his Tomb. The man was the only Nazi buried within Israeli walls. You made your characters to blend with history. Well done as always. Best to you Barbara.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the generous support.
Comment from apky
Another of your chapters that I enjoyed and learnt something from.
Excellent writing as usual, but for the little nit below, which you probably meant to be as you wrote it.
This morning, I have a few extra things to take care (of-unless you deliberately meant to leave it out).
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Another of your chapters that I enjoyed and learnt something from.
Excellent writing as usual, but for the little nit below, which you probably meant to be as you wrote it.
This morning, I have a few extra things to take care (of-unless you deliberately meant to leave it out).
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I will check that area, just in case. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for another part of this story. I loved the discussion on Shakespeare. You gave a great deal of detail about 'King Lear,' one of the lesser known plays.
I'm waiting for the pace to pick up a bit,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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thank you for another part of this story. I loved the discussion on Shakespeare. You gave a great deal of detail about 'King Lear,' one of the lesser known plays.
I'm waiting for the pace to pick up a bit,
~patty~
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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The information given in this post will be very important later. Thank you for this kind review.
Comment from Hamiel
Always written smooth and good to the eyes and all the senses specially the sentiments of being carried into the story.I inspired you a lot. Thank you for this share.Keep up your good works.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Always written smooth and good to the eyes and all the senses specially the sentiments of being carried into the story.I inspired you a lot. Thank you for this share.Keep up your good works.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
