Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Yes, at times I feel exactly the same. This poem made me smile and laugh with the thought that someone else feels this way as winter descends upon us. Then again,
I somehow manage to get some deep soul searching pieces completed during this time. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi moongirlwriter. I am glad I have some like minded reviewers and thank you for reading my lune. I seem to be in a lull at the moment and this was how I am feeling during winter. I shall try to take your advice on board and do some soul searching ( by the warm fire LOL . Cheers

Comment from SarahPenn1

Excellent

Writers block is beautifully expressed in this lune. I love the alliteration in "winter woes" and also the fact that you have chosen winter as the season to accompany a weakened muse as winter is the darkest season, some may say the gloomiest.

-S

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Madforevol.Thank you for your review and interest in sending me feedback, Yes I find winter difficult at times and at the moment as you say gloomy. Winters writers block I agree Cheers

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

What a stunning Lune! The picture is award-winning, and words don't disappoint. Your artistic presentation is phenomenally good, and drawn the reader in.

Good luck in the contest with this stunner.

Love, Y.

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Y. Thank you for this uplifting review and your words have lifted my spirit . i try to reflect my mood at the time of writing and this seemed fitting . in appreciation of your encouragement Cheers