Comment from ragerde

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this delightful childhood memory story. From one to one hundred, you you took me right there to that bowing alley, and that is what a good short story should do.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Thank you for your read and your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

A good little story of nostalgia and good use of the beginning and ending words. A worthy entry for the contest. best of luck in the voting booth.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Thank you for your read and your comment.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This says a fantastic participation in a game where both father and son played, son played something beyond expectation of his father, son bowled one hundred; I liked.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you for the review. Much appreciated.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

A one hundred game (without the bumpers being raised of course) is not a bad score for an eight-year-old to pull off.
Especially for their first time bowling.
The pros on television make it look so easy, but it's really not as easy as it appears.
Neither is writing a complete story in just 100 words.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
~Dean :)

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Boy, you got that right. Thanks for the read and the review.

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Jul-2017

You bet. :}