Comment from apky

Excellent

You keep on amazing me with your various talents.
To hear you talk about a kigo or satori (all Greek to me)
only makes me shake my head in admiration.

Way to go, and with this one, you had me; the mother and the loving wife:

Why are you so sad?
What can I do to help you?
Here is my love for comfort

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Aki;
thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, Patty,

This touched me in my heart. I suffer from depression and sometimes is just me and God by my side. Divine love is healing in times like that.
Good job sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Gypsy; those of us that live with depression need to rely on Him and His love,

~patty~

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

I can almost feel the Creator wrapping loving arms around me. When no one else cares He is always with us. Your powerful, well written poem, makes this clear. The artwork is beautiful. Together they make a great presentation.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

beautiful, Patty. and true.
All the beauty of nature, I think, is for our pleasure - designed to give us joy, to help heal if we're sad.
Your poem, and the accompanying picture, depict God's ways of showing His love and comfort. well said.
a good 5-7-5.
pome lover

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning,once again.

Beautiful sentiments complimented by a beautiful picture. It's good to see one who is not afraid to show their belief in God. Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Ray; thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from Aussie

Exceptional

Beautiful artwork to compliment your lovely three-line poem. He holds us in His arms, all we have to do is reach out to our Father and be rocked with love. Well done. Best wishes for your contest entry.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

thank you, thank you for the lovely shining sixth star,

thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from AngelsDemons

Excellent

I really liked this, it flowed so well and I love the message. What a beautiful picture choice. I find these three line poems very difficult to do myself, I think this should do very well in the contest, good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you for the lovely review and good wishes.

~patty~

reply by AngelsDemons on 25-Jul-2017

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I looked at the prompt, so your choice of the five seven seven count is on target.
I might have written three lines of anapestic octameter, a short novel...syllable count is on, faith message is clear, excellent.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi; I wonder if I could write in anapestic octameter?

I'm glad you enjoyed the three lines and found the message to be clear,

~patty~

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello ~patty~
now my Fanstory friend your three line entry for the 3 line contest is excellent about your wonderful thoughts about creation

Gert

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Gert;
thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from JW

Excellent

The picture you have posted is a beautiful scene.

Thanks for posting this, Patty. There is no doubt that nature can bring about remarkable beauty, sometimes. JW

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~