Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a lovely three-line poem that I am interpreting as a faith poem which certainly reflects my thoughts, too. When comfort is needed, He is thee for us. Thank you for sharing. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017

sorry I'm so late in replying. I've been working with an editor on my work, 'One Man's Journey;' they are hoping to have it ready for sale next fall (2018!)

thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work,

~patty~

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Sweet and simple. Touching and well presented. This is true to form. This distills the real calling of life in three short lines. Well done. Good luck! Lovely sky=painting by the Divine Artist.

Love and blessings, rd

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem,

~patty~

reply by rama devi on 28-Jul-2017

:-))

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful three line poem you have penned. You used very good wording and a very beautiful picture from the Master. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Teri;
thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Patty,
I enjoyed reading your poem. I am glad you wrote that this wasn't a haiku. Seems most everyone is writing 5-7-5 poems as haiku now--even when not required.

Your art choice is perfect. It is like God's blanket to comfort one no matter what the issue is.

Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Jan; thank you so much for the lovely review. I put in the notes because my 5-7-5 poems were being reviewed as haiku, which of course failed to meet the requirements.

I'm glad you enjoyed this one.

~patty~

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Mustangpatty,


The descriptive words are well chosen. The beats were correct. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The words you chose worked very well. The flow was very nice. The artwork complemented your poem.

There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Camille;
thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from Father Flaps

Excellent

Hi Patty
I think a lot of people overlook the third part of the Trinity, the Holy Spirit, the Comforter, the Helper. Many times we pray to God (or talk to God) in Jesus' name. They are both in Heaven. The Holy Spirit is with us now, here on earth. So your last line could read, "I will send the Comforter".
There's a song I have loved through the years, by Farrell & Farrell (a husband & wife team), "Boundless Love"... please have a listen,
https://youtu.be/WqZRCtx0tNs
We all need comfort now and then. Thanks for your witness in writing this poem. Best of luck in the contest!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi there;
thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece. I'm glad you felt the witness come through,

~patty~

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Many thanks for sharing this work. I apologise for not keeping up with your work but I have been very busy. I hope to catch up very soon. Best wishes, Chloe.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Chloe; no worries about not keeping up - you're a teenager, you're supposed to be busy!

Thanks for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Excellent poem. When I read it, I feel like God is speaking to me. I like how the first two lines are questions and the last line is a statement. I wish you well in this unique contest.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Hello Patty:
Thanks for the wonderful poem. Speaking of love for comfort - it's a comforting thought to know that I've got my partner by my side walking through life and all the ups and the downs. I know we can handle it. There's nothing too big or too crazy that's going to tear us apart.

All the best...
Bill

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi Bill;
thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

god lends us his hands,god lends us his help,and god lends us his comfort. god is like a helpful resource when we need help he is there. your poem was a delight to read and it shows comfort. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017

Hi; thank you so much for your thoughtful review of this piece.

~patty~