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haiku and haiga

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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Michael,

hahaha.... this is funny and so well written. I love the presentation. Honey whipped is the perfect satori.... LoL Thank you for adding your beautiful haiku to our book.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

Comment from Sis Cat
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Michael, this sweet haiku made me smile because of its delicious imagery and play on words. It is highly crafted and clever. All lines work together to deliver your superb satori.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

Comment from Mustang Patty
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LOL! Wow - I must be getting warped in my old age. This actually makes sense to me. A well written haiku about the wonderful nectar and it is well presented with the photo of our friend, the bee.

Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017