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Paris Dreaming

Brings back memories of my mom. :)

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Comment from JanPerry
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This is good. It is creative. I don't enjoy the last line, which destroy s the meter of the small poem.
You never went to Paris but you will in the future I'm sure.

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Thank you for your review and feedback. Suggestions like yours help to make me a better writer.
Comment from kathleenspalding
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Haha! Too cute! Sweet little five seven five poem gave me a chuckle. Excellent use of artwork and colors. I don't see anything that needs to be corrected. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    Thanks so much. I'm glad you liked it.
reply by kathleenspalding on 25-Jul-2017
    You're welcome
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
Comment from damommy
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Oh, lovely. I remember 'Evening in Paris' so well. My mother wore it, too.

I saw a while back that you can still get it online. Who'da thunk it? lol

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 Comment Written 24-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
    I used to get it for Christmas when I was little. It made me feel very grown up😊. Thank you for taking the time to read it.
reply by damommy on 25-Jul-2017
    It brought back good memories. 8-)
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