belly up poolside (haiku)
What, me worry?84 total reviews
Comment from Bill O'Bier
A great tribute to the pooch in your life. You know, a dog can snap you out of any kind of bad mood that you're in faster than any thing I can think of. Thanks for a great piece.
Bill~
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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A great tribute to the pooch in your life. You know, a dog can snap you out of any kind of bad mood that you're in faster than any thing I can think of. Thanks for a great piece.
Bill~
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Bill, for your review of my great tribute to my dog Mina.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very cute Haiku on summer, I love the "dog days of summer" part the best.
Good luck to you, my friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This is a very cute Haiku on summer, I love the "dog days of summer" part the best.
Good luck to you, my friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Kerry, for your review of my cute summer Haiku and for wishing me luck for the contest.
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You are very welcome:))
Comment from Janet Foor
Sweet! This is adorable. Loved the picture of the little Chihuahua soaking up sun by the pool.
Dog days of summer is a perfect satori line with an excellent play on words.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Sweet! This is adorable. Loved the picture of the little Chihuahua soaking up sun by the pool.
Dog days of summer is a perfect satori line with an excellent play on words.
Well done.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review. I was surprised to learn that my niece, an art teacher, spent twenty minutes giving Mina here a tummy rub in order to coax her to remain in that position for the shot.
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That is so cool. I didn't realize it was Mina. What a sweetie.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Chihuahua's are my weak spot so you have got me there! I long to have one but instead I have a little white Jack Russell Buffy and she hates cuddles which is what I wanted in a dog. I still love her though. Anyway this poem is very amusing with the picture matching perfectly, very well done, with the link between Chihuahua and Dog days. kind regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Chihuahua's are my weak spot so you have got me there! I long to have one but instead I have a little white Jack Russell Buffy and she hates cuddles which is what I wanted in a dog. I still love her though. Anyway this poem is very amusing with the picture matching perfectly, very well done, with the link between Chihuahua and Dog days. kind regards Meia :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for your review of my amusing haiku. I was surprised to learn that my niece, an art teacher, spent twenty minutes giving Mina here a tummy rub in order to coax her to remain in that position for the shot.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Well said. This reminds me of this time of year in Florida, except everyone's at the beach, laying in the sand, soaking up the sun. That's a great picture you chose to go with your poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Well said. This reminds me of this time of year in Florida, except everyone's at the beach, laying in the sand, soaking up the sun. That's a great picture you chose to go with your poem.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Thomas, for your review. I was surprised to learn that my niece, an art teacher, spent twenty minutes giving my dog Mina here a tummy rub in order to coax her to remain in that position for the shot.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I really like your haiku. Right now I am having anything but relaxation poolside.
But, enough about me. This is a precious haiku. Clever, funny, and the illustration really fits the text. Good for you. Enjoy your summer.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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I really like your haiku. Right now I am having anything but relaxation poolside.
But, enough about me. This is a precious haiku. Clever, funny, and the illustration really fits the text. Good for you. Enjoy your summer.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Nancy, for your review of my clever, funny Haiku.
Comment from dmt1967
This is such a cute poem and picture. The poem fits the picture so well and is very well written. I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest and have a great week.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This is such a cute poem and picture. The poem fits the picture so well and is very well written. I enjoyed reading it and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest and have a great week.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your review and wishing me luck in the contest with this cute poem.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahahahaha - great wordplay here, and a clever choice of photograph to compliment your words - very cute. Dog and cat poems seem to do well in the booth. Good luck with this charmer. :))
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Hahahahaha - great wordplay here, and a clever choice of photograph to compliment your words - very cute. Dog and cat poems seem to do well in the booth. Good luck with this charmer. :))
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Dawn, for your review of this charmer and for wishing me luck in the contest. My niece, an art teacher, photographed my dog Mina.
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It was my pleasure. :))
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. I think I mudt go join the Chihuahua there at the pool's side. Although, I will not put on my bathing suit, the sun is not warm enough yet. Lol.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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A very well-written haiku. I think I mudt go join the Chihuahua there at the pool's side. Although, I will not put on my bathing suit, the sun is not warm enough yet. Lol.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Oh, thank you, Sandra, for your humorous review of my poem. My Chihuahua Mina is looking for poolside company.
Comment from tfawcus
Nice use of the term 'dog days'. It looks as though your Chihuahua is in for a 'Sirius' case of sunburn! One of the charming things about dogs is their absolute lack of inhibitions.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Nice use of the term 'dog days'. It looks as though your Chihuahua is in for a 'Sirius' case of sunburn! One of the charming things about dogs is their absolute lack of inhibitions.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Yes, my dog totally lacks inhibitions. Thank you for your review.
