Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A proud mother
Is she
With a brood of
Twenty and three
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Hailey is the daughter
Of her daughter
The shining apple
Of her grandmother's eye.
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This is very well written

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Hi Charlie; thank you so much for reading and reviewing - I loved your poem,

~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 22-Jul-2017

You're welcome, Patty. Charlie

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem for your grand daughter Hailey, and she is a very beautiful little lady and clearly the pride of her granny who wish she could be her own little girl.

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for reading and your thoughtful review.

~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good morning, Patty

The first line I understand. You got me with the last two...so I'm guessing the girl is pretty, but you're saying it matters not if she's your daughter?

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Hi Ray; the last lines are wondering if she is pretty BECAUSE she is related to me? No, I think not.

thanks for reading and reviewing,

~patty~