Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your well structured Leonine poem about Hollywood and its allure. All too often, people are drawn in by the promise of stardom and the glittering lights - but life doesn't always give us the beauty we strive for,

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thank you for the great review, Patty. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very good entry for the contest and I wish you the best. You poem points out so well the struggles of those who go to Hollywood to make it big. Many come in contest with individual who only want to use them and then they leave them to make it on their own. This I am sure why it seems that young stars are in the end quite unhappy and begin using drug and alcohol to excess and endanger their health and the career they dreamed of before going to Hollywood. Patricia

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 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thank you for the fantastic review, Patricia. Yes, I'm sure many of them find out the hard way that it's nothing like what they had imagined. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.

Ron