Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Amen to that. Each day is a gift and if we are happy and enjoy life that's the aim of everyone. A well written and enjoyed 5-7-5 on the topic of longevity with appreciation. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

Comment from expressions9

Excellent

Dear Writer
Your 5-7-5 poems speaks volumes and fits the prompt well. This is wonderful to read when we think of how many reach old age and are suffering with many ailments. Your poem speaks of one who has always loved life and tried your best to continue doing so, into old age. The image is amazing and complements your poem well. All the best in the contest!
Kind regards,
Christine

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017

Thank you so much, Christine, for your insightful and encouraging comments.

Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

Loving life as well as good health in one's "golden" years. Nice that it speaks about the contest theme in two ways. Me personally, I'd rather just have the "big one" and drop dead when my time comes.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017

Thanks, Thal, for your thumbs up. Listen to advice from this old guy, who's not Pollyannaish (for lack of a better word) - there are health benefits to thinking positively.

reply by Thal1959 on 21-Jul-2017

You're welcome - it was my pleasure.