Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hello
This is a good choice for your 5-7-5 poem, contest enrty. Youvhave expressed your love of the smell of fresh books, the turning of the pages. I too perfer to read the books from actual books. Good job

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Nicely composed. Your 5-7-5 reads smoothly and has an interesting theme.
The illustration works well with your words. This is a fine entry for the contest and I wish you much luck in it. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

And thanks for taking time to read and critique zanya

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem for the I love contest. You used very good wording and the art work you chose went well with it. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Thanks for taking time to read and critique zanya

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

a very charming 5-7-5 about you and your love of antique books. It is a delightful smell, isn't it? The only thing better is an old book store full of old books you couldn't find anywhere else,

~patty~

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017

Yes it's such a distinct smell !!Thanks for reading and critique zanya