Comment from KL Williams

Excellent

Your poem is so true. As a newbie it can be intimidating to put stuff out there, and as a veteran it can be offensive to be critiqued. You can't ever let those things hold you back, just keep writing! Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017

Thanks much for the read and the review.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written encouraging poem to find success in the things we write. There is always room for improvement in a first attempt of writing. Do the required improvements and thank the reviewer for their advice. Be critical as a reviewer without being cruel and nasty.

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017

Thanks so much. Appreciate you reading.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks practical word of inspiration to the writers, what and how writers could achieve success to see their dreams come true, and advices not to quit but continue writing; I liked.

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 Comment Written 20-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017

Thanks much for reading and your thoughtful review.