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Comment from DR DIP
The perfect love poem. I have so missed your wonderful writes Susan as i have said before you have a beautiful way with words and this poem is no exception. Thanks for sharing.
dip
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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The perfect love poem. I have so missed your wonderful writes Susan as i have said before you have a beautiful way with words and this poem is no exception. Thanks for sharing.
dip
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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....you always get me. Thanks dip.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your beautiful love poem "Still Loving You". It rhymed beautifully except in stanza six lines one and three and stanza seven lines two and four.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading your beautiful love poem "Still Loving You". It rhymed beautifully except in stanza six lines one and three and stanza seven lines two and four.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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lol I pasted the incorrect version of this poem!..ughhh...tears/fears...but are you ready close...as in cloze?/suppose?Thanks for the review!! I really do appreciate you taking the time to read and review! :-))
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this is a great entry for the love contest I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I really like the way that the rhyming scheme flows in this. Great alliteration. God bless you. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this is a great entry for the love contest I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I really like the way that the rhyming scheme flows in this. Great alliteration. God bless you. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lola
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing! I do appreciate it!!
Comment from Curly Girly
You have created a lovely poem with these beautiful words. I liked the way you chose to conclude the day inside this last stanza:
Alas! Dusk beckons petals close,
bid gardens sweet adieu ...
much needed slumber, I suppose;
but, I'm still loving you.
Good rhyme and content. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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You have created a lovely poem with these beautiful words. I liked the way you chose to conclude the day inside this last stanza:
Alas! Dusk beckons petals close,
bid gardens sweet adieu ...
much needed slumber, I suppose;
but, I'm still loving you.
Good rhyme and content. Best wishes.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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:-) Well thank you very much!!!! I appreciate the review!! :-)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh this was a fun read taking us to the scene as love is remembered and the lover away, but the love still remains no matter what. Excllent ABAB rhyme and flow
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Oh this was a fun read taking us to the scene as love is remembered and the lover away, but the love still remains no matter what. Excllent ABAB rhyme and flow
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Hi Barb!!...thanks for reading and for yet another awesome review!! HUGS
Comment from Ricky1024
This "Love Poem" was beautifully etched from Mind to Heart, then Soul...
"Not many of these come to me why?"
'Because you can count on one hand those whom can pull words from above."
"I am one."
"Usually a "Gift" given after many tests and losses."
"Ran out of Sixes but this will do well on it's own merit."
Thanks,
Dr. Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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This "Love Poem" was beautifully etched from Mind to Heart, then Soul...
"Not many of these come to me why?"
'Because you can count on one hand those whom can pull words from above."
"I am one."
"Usually a "Gift" given after many tests and losses."
"Ran out of Sixes but this will do well on it's own merit."
Thanks,
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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HI RICKY!!....thanks for the sweet review. I just started writing again....glad you enjoyed this. :-)))
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Your welcome!
Ricky...
Comment from patcelaw
Susan, this is beautifully worded and has a very sing along feel to it. It was a joy to read and now a pleasure to review. Blessings for a wonderful evening and a great tomorrow., Patricia
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Susan, this is beautifully worded and has a very sing along feel to it. It was a joy to read and now a pleasure to review. Blessings for a wonderful evening and a great tomorrow., Patricia
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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HI PAT!!!...Thanks for this sweet review!!! HUGS
Comment from royowen
A nicely written love poem entry in this contest. The language is old but still the best poetic language, particularly for this poetry type, I love the old, but now infrequently used, such as - behest and happenstance, seem like a glitch in time itself. Nicely paced and smoothly delivered in tetrameter/trimetric form, with abab rhyming, excellent entry, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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A nicely written love poem entry in this contest. The language is old but still the best poetic language, particularly for this poetry type, I love the old, but now infrequently used, such as - behest and happenstance, seem like a glitch in time itself. Nicely paced and smoothly delivered in tetrameter/trimetric form, with abab rhyming, excellent entry, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Hey Roy!! thanks so much for this sweet review!!! I so do appreciate it!! HUGS
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Well done
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
After reading 'Still Loving You', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
The title speaks for itself-- One still loves the other.
This poem is deep in content.
Feelings are being expressed.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font selected.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Love Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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After reading 'Still Loving You', I find that it meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
The title speaks for itself-- One still loves the other.
This poem is deep in content.
Feelings are being expressed.
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the picture and color of font selected.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Love Poem.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017
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Well thank you very much for this sweet review!!! I do appreciate you taking the time to do so! :-)
