Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I wonder if the baby's father knew about albinoism. The baby will be perfectly normal. My neighbor's eyes were purplish... very pretty color. I can where red eyes would remind ignnorant people of the devil, but as James said, they will chnage somewhat. Though my neighbor's dad did have eyes that were more red than purple.

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 Comment Written 19-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

Yes, I've been reading up on Albinoism, and normally it's in the parent's genes. But sometimes it can go a few generations before it comes out. Back away, people were frightened of anything different, hence the burning of the so called witches. I was surprised at how many people don't know about this, but then again, I haven't actually met one, you are the first person I've spoken with who has. Did you know much about them before you met one?

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 19-Jul-2017

No, I didn't. They both seemed normal enough. Was hard for her to be outside in the summer, so no beaches!

I'm off to bed. G'night, sweetie. :)

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

Goodnight! xxxx

Comment from Walu Feral

Exceptional

G'day Cousin.

Well, I am getting good at this reading thing! That's 2 out of 2 I've read now.

"Daveth, and another child I came across, could see me, even though I appeared invisible to any adult." (Wish I could do that! Just think how rich I'd be hahahaha!)

" he seems like a normal little boy, although it can't be good for him being locked away in the attic." (You betchya.)

Beautiful work, mate. Nothing I could spot that needs correcting.

What a fabulous story and this has so much potential to head in any direction and keep going into several books.

Well done.

Cheers Fez

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

Oh, you really have made my day, dear Cousin!!! Thank you so much for the 6 stars and the lovely comments you've made. I've thought about what I'd do if I could be invisible. There are some people I'd like to spook!! LOL Big hugs and lots of love. xx Sandra xxx

reply by Walu Feral on 19-Jul-2017

Delia is going to do that for me I think.

The other day she was heading to the kitchen and I said...

"Crikey! That's a great plan, Princess. I'd love a "Cuppa Tea."

After 30 minutes she came back into my office and said...

"What is it baby?"

What is what... and where's that cuppa Tea you promised?"

"Yes," she said.

"Yes, what Princess?"

"A Capitan... where do I get your Capitan?"

Sheesh, hahahahaha! That's after being together for 6 years. If I'd said it in Visaya, her native speak, it would have been a bloody site easier lol.

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

LOL!! Bless her heart, you could even write a book on all those lovely interpretations Delia comes up with, that would be a real giggle! I can quite understand how you fell in love with her! She must have Thwaites blood in her too!!! :))

reply by Walu Feral on 19-Jul-2017

Hahahaha! I have a list of "Deliaisms" and I'll write them at some point.

reply by the author on 19-Jul-2017

I think you've hit on a good title there too!! LOL, Deliaisms! Brilliant!