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Spiritual etheree

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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Dove,
I enjoyed your etheree. I do not know that much about Catholic religion, but I feel that this is one way of learning a bit. Good job on the syllable counts per line--all are correct. The picture is perfect, too. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Dear Jan, Thank you for your review. dove
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written Etheree poem you have penned. You used very good wording and very good imagery! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Dear Teri, Thank you for your review. God bless you, Donna
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
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A great statement of faith and a reminder that forgiveness is achievable. I like your use of the ever-building Etheree to state your case. Good intermittent rhymes and use of strong c and s sounds. Great photo too. - Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Dear Wendy, Thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written spiritual Etheree. To talk to a spiritual leader about our sins and short comings help us to realize we don't need a psychologist to renew our spiritual life.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Dear Sandra, Thank you for your review. Dove