In His Waiting Room
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Comment from Nikki-Nicole
'In His Waiting Room'- I like the title very much. It's just right for this poem.
Your poems always touch me in some kind of way.
My favorite part: 'Relax in the waiting room God has you in
for in the end he will help you win,
the newest long race He's set before you
and you'll know God will see you through.'- These words are so encouraging. It allows the reader to continue to want to live life.
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Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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'In His Waiting Room'- I like the title very much. It's just right for this poem.
Your poems always touch me in some kind of way.
My favorite part: 'Relax in the waiting room God has you in
for in the end he will help you win,
the newest long race He's set before you
and you'll know God will see you through.'- These words are so encouraging. It allows the reader to continue to want to live life.
The image shown supports the topic discussed. The background goes well with the picture and color of font selected.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Nicole. It is always a pleasure to know that something I write touches a persons spirit.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Very well done alternating rhyming stanzas. It is so true, everything you ever write about isGod giving you the words to pass on to us.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Very well done alternating rhyming stanzas. It is so true, everything you ever write about isGod giving you the words to pass on to us.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Barb.
Comment from Teri7
This is truly beautiful what you have penned about God's waiting room. The only waiting room I am not afraid to go in these days. So well wording and lovely art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This is truly beautiful what you have penned about God's waiting room. The only waiting room I am not afraid to go in these days. So well wording and lovely art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Teri.
Comment from jaded831
God is always in control. It's hard to listen I today's fast pace world. That's why we need to pray and talk to God daily. Your poem reflects what we need to do in words we can understand and relate to. Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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God is always in control. It's hard to listen I today's fast pace world. That's why we need to pray and talk to God daily. Your poem reflects what we need to do in words we can understand and relate to. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Jaded.
Comment from Sasha
This made me think of the times I did not listen and wonder what I missed. Fortunately, God is patient and I am sure gives us many chances to listen. Very nice work with this one.
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This made me think of the times I did not listen and wonder what I missed. Fortunately, God is patient and I am sure gives us many chances to listen. Very nice work with this one.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Sasha. He is not willing that any would perish so He gives us many chances.
Comment from dragonpoet
This free verse with rhyme gives the lesson the God is leading us and all we have to do is listen. We wait and sometimes don't listen. But patiently He waits and we learn.
Keep writing
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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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This free verse with rhyme gives the lesson the God is leading us and all we have to do is listen. We wait and sometimes don't listen. But patiently He waits and we learn.
Keep writing
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, DP
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No problem.
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