Caught in Time
5/7/5 Butterfly Contest15 total reviews
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a good poem.
It's going to be captured just like the image .
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font selected.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Butterfly.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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You've written a good poem.
It's going to be captured just like the image .
It consists of three lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5
The image shown supports the poem. The background goes well with the art and color of font selected.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your Butterfly.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for this lovely review, Nicole. I feel for those little butterflies pinned down forever, when they could have died the way nature intended.
Comment from royowen
I think creating a perpetual trophy,
and apprehending a trophy of beauty,
is to pin it to a board heh heh.
Well done Val, you've done extremely wel in this contest,
good luck, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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I think creating a perpetual trophy,
and apprehending a trophy of beauty,
is to pin it to a board heh heh.
Well done Val, you've done extremely wel in this contest,
good luck, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you, Ray. It is always great to hear from you.
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Most welcome Val
Comment from Curly Girly
Your verse depicts the way some butterflies end:
Wild butterfly pinned
to paper under clear glass
Frozen blue beauty
This one will no longer be flying free.
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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Your verse depicts the way some butterflies end:
Wild butterfly pinned
to paper under clear glass
Frozen blue beauty
This one will no longer be flying free.
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Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review, and for "getting" my little poem. Yes, "this one will no longer be flying free" - sadly.
Comment from Taffspride
A perfect entry for the contest Val. It could certainly be a haiku, your well thought out words have painted the picture of the beautiful insect.
I wish you good luck in the contest
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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A perfect entry for the contest Val. It could certainly be a haiku, your well thought out words have painted the picture of the beautiful insect.
I wish you good luck in the contest
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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You know I treasure your "exceptional reviews," but I love your support more. This one isn't perfect, and the last line isn't where I want it. But the picture of butterflies pinned and on display just came to me, and I had to write about it. Hugs Buddy
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written butterfly 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and great art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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This is a very beautifully written butterfly 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive wording and great art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 16-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you for this exceptional review, and believe me I treasure every one. I wanted it to be be clear and concise to prove my point. I hate displays of butterflies like this, and I just wish they could die as nature planned it.
