Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi Gypsy; thank you for sharing this haiku. Your presentation and the words all work well together. You made it easy for me to understand this satori by emphasizing the 'sol.'

I'm maybe a step closer to understanding the concept,

~patty~

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Thank you, Patty, I appreciate your kind review.
gypsy

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hola Guapa, como estas? I loved this haiku and your satori line is marvelous with such a pun. In isolation the 'sol' being the sun in Spanish of course.Wonderfully thought out. The sun as you know is punishing here in Spain at this time of the year. Great haiku. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Yes, I knew you would understand it. Thank you, Ulla, I appreciate your kind review.
gypsy

Comment from R.A.Partin

Excellent

I like your pun at the end. It reminds me of summer days here in Washington. The heat might not be too bad for some people but for locals like me it's unbearable. I spend most of my days inside where it's cool. Then it gets really hot at night. Summer heat is annoying...

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Thank you, my friend, I appreciate your kind review.
gypsy

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hi, Gypsy,

The summer (July) sun is the challenge. My nemesis. Actually, it's more of the humidity than the sun itself. I'll have to check it out. I love the way you put 'sol' in italics :P

TC

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, Rasmine, have a great day.

gypsy hugs

reply by Rasmine on 16-Jul-2017

Hugs!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Exceptional

Hahaha...
Sol, as in the Latin name for the "Sun", right, MariVal?
Damn I'm good, ain't I?
But hey, I gotta agree with ya here. It's hotter than a snake's ass in a wagon rut where I live too!
I gave this a six primarily for the satori--the cleverness and wit involved.
But in actuality, the entire haiku, including the presentation, is outstanding.
Nice work!
~Dean ;)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Hotter than a snake's ass? hahaha.... thank you, I needed that. Thank you very much, Dean, your exceptional review and six stars are appreciated. Have a great day. :)
gypsy hugs

ps. stay cool

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Jul-2017

You too.

Comment from sharonlshelley

Exceptional

l beautiful haiku the piece all flows lovely with the picture i found so few word very powerful but sincere . thanks for sharing you work with us Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, Sharon, your exceptional review and six stars are appreciated. Have a great day. :)
gypsy

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

Lol, nice use of isolation in this one, Gypsy. It seems your Haiku club is doing well and you guys and girls have a book out too. All the best.

Have a great day!
Russell

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 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017

Thank you very much, Russell, for your exceptional review, is appreciated. Have a great day. :)
gypsy