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Painting By Jackson Pollock

5-7-5 Art Poem Contest Entry

5 total reviews 
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
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Oh, this is really good!!!! Thoughtfully composed and exceedingly witty. Now the question is, what to do with all of those invaluable paintings your grandson made? Fine work! Seraph~

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
    Oh, he got bored - said, "Is that all there is to it?" Now he's into architecture, and designed their new family home. Someone told him it looks like something Frank Lloyd might have built, and he said, "Who's that guy?" KIds!

    Thanks for the terrific review!

    Don

reply by Seraphim Delphinium on 18-Jul-2017
    How wonderful! Thanks for sharing!
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL. I like Pollack's art. Good choice. Maybe your grandson is the new Pollack.
A fun take on this painting. Good luck in the contest with this amusing
entry. Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    I don't want him to appear to be a copycat. His renown should result from finding his own "voice." Thanks for the compliment and good wishes, Marilyn.
    Don
reply by BeasPeas on 17-Jul-2017
    He was instrumental in starting a new movement, that's why he is important. He's considered one of the "moderns." Marilyn
Comment from l.raven
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this is toooo funny...I say that because it looks like some of my grandsons work as well...and it's beautiful...LOL...very well thought of...and very well written...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
    That is so nice to "hear!" Thanks for your terrific review, Linda!
reply by l.raven on 16-Jul-2017
    you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Exceptional
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This is a wonderful 5-7-5 art poem.
Which describes Pollack's art with such wit.
The humour is fantastic and the funniest thing I,ve read in ages.
Think you have a winner here, good luck and a happy birthday to your grandson.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2017

Comment from rama devi
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Ha ha ha...great satirical closing twist. Made me chuckle. Well voiced in true to form style. This should do well in the contest. Super witty! I love how Jackson and Grandson are like a slant rhyme--ironic subtle metaphor there!

Chuckling,
rd

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 17-Jul-2017
    Rama, I couldn't ask for a better review. Thank you so much. Your chuckling is very rewarding.
reply by rama devi on 17-Jul-2017
    Thanks for your gracious response! ;-)))