Nature's Beauty
Wildflowers provide beauty.21 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
It's a lovely 5-7-5 on the subject of a flower. Enchanting, bedazzling picture that warms up your heart. I really liked it, but found a middle line a little awkward because of the use of "in" before "the beauty of nature" - being that your previous line was "Color cascades with". Suggestion:
Color cascades with
the true beauty of nature
wild flowers delight
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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It's a lovely 5-7-5 on the subject of a flower. Enchanting, bedazzling picture that warms up your heart. I really liked it, but found a middle line a little awkward because of the use of "in" before "the beauty of nature" - being that your previous line was "Color cascades with". Suggestion:
Color cascades with
the true beauty of nature
wild flowers delight
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing and your kind comments. I deliberately used 'with-' so ultimately it would sound like 'with-in'.
Comment from sharonlshelley
a lovely 575 poem a pleasure to read and the picture is a lovely reflection to it
good luck in the poetry competition and thanks for sharing your work
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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a lovely 575 poem a pleasure to read and the picture is a lovely reflection to it
good luck in the poetry competition and thanks for sharing your work
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review, I really appreciate your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 flower poem. Wild flowers grow naturally in the wild and they are usually precious jewels in the field that are enjoyed by wild animals and insects.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 flower poem. Wild flowers grow naturally in the wild and they are usually precious jewels in the field that are enjoyed by wild animals and insects.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reviewing, I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Dean Kuch
It took me a moment to realize that your second line and the word "with" was merely a continuation of the word "within", Anonymous Poet.
Now that I've figured that out, it makes perfect sense to me.
Good alliteration in line one with "Color cascades".
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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It took me a moment to realize that your second line and the word "with" was merely a continuation of the word "within", Anonymous Poet.
Now that I've figured that out, it makes perfect sense to me.
Good alliteration in line one with "Color cascades".
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your good luck wishes. Wow, now I really feel good that it got your attention, again thanks.
Comment from Boogienights
I really liked your poem and the picture you choose to go with it. I wish you luck in the contest.thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I really liked your poem and the picture you choose to go with it. I wish you luck in the contest.thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reviewing and your kind comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from honeytree
The art work is
really great for
these words written
so beautiful the words
written for this poem.
Honey tree
I have no six left
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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The art work is
really great for
these words written
so beautiful the words
written for this poem.
Honey tree
I have no six left
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review. Awww I do not worry about the stars, I am just happy that you enjoyed it.
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great.
Honeytree
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the wild flowers and the picture you chose with the flowers and pretty deer. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem you have penned for the contest about the wild flowers and the picture you chose with the flowers and pretty deer. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review, I appreciate both your kind words and good luck wishes.
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you so much for sharing your entry in the 5-7-5 Flower poetry contest. You have managed to do a great job with your presentation and limited syllable count. The imagery is wonderful. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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thank you so much for sharing your entry in the 5-7-5 Flower poetry contest. You have managed to do a great job with your presentation and limited syllable count. The imagery is wonderful. Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review, thanks for the good luck wishes.
Comment from bmethner
Beautifully written poem with a lovely art presentation. However, I think your first line only has 4 syllables and requires 5. Your word choice simply adds to the light beautiful message of the poem.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Beautifully written poem with a lovely art presentation. However, I think your first line only has 4 syllables and requires 5. Your word choice simply adds to the light beautiful message of the poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review, MMM I was sure it was 5 syllables col-or cas-cades =opps Sorry about that.
Comment from c_lucas
Think of the Great Outdoors
As God Cathedral
Heavenly beauty
Abounds
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Anyone who have visited the wildness of the great outdoors, can attest to its beauty. This is very well written.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Think of the Great Outdoors
As God Cathedral
Heavenly beauty
Abounds
***
Anyone who have visited the wildness of the great outdoors, can attest to its beauty. This is very well written.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and then taking the time to review.
