Balloon Memories
Thinking about balloons6 total reviews
Comment from pipersfancy
A unique and different approach to this contest prompt which I find charming and well done! I appreciate that the child laughs with joy at the sight of the balloon sailing away in the sky.
Best of luck with the contest,
pf
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
A unique and different approach to this contest prompt which I find charming and well done! I appreciate that the child laughs with joy at the sight of the balloon sailing away in the sky.
Best of luck with the contest,
pf
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem shows how important balloons seem to be as a part of celebrating all
the major crossroads of life. The are pretty and bright and hold our dreams of fun and freedom.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
This poem shows how important balloons seem to be as a part of celebrating all
the major crossroads of life. The are pretty and bright and hold our dreams of fun and freedom.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading my poem. I really appreciate hearing from other writers about my work.
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You're welcome.
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Comment from BeasPeas
This is a very nice poem. It asks the reader to recall all the balloons received in the past on those happy occasions. We are fortunate to have so many. Your poem is unique in theme. It IS the simple things that bring us memories and pleasure. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
This is a very nice poem. It asks the reader to recall all the balloons received in the past on those happy occasions. We are fortunate to have so many. Your poem is unique in theme. It IS the simple things that bring us memories and pleasure. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem.I agree that it's the simple things in life that we will remember fondly.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Mystery Poet,
I like your approach to the contest prompt. You are right about how many times balloons appear for many celebrations. They do add to the memories of each occasion. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
Mystery Poet,
I like your approach to the contest prompt. You are right about how many times balloons appear for many celebrations. They do add to the memories of each occasion. Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 15-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for reading my poem. I still love balloons even today, there is no age limit when it comes to what makes you happy😊.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the value, essence, importance and worth of balloons and the memories since one's early age, remembering the celebrations and balloons in colours, shapes, how they gave enjoyment; I liked.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
This speaks the value, essence, importance and worth of balloons and the memories since one's early age, remembering the celebrations and balloons in colours, shapes, how they gave enjoyment; I liked.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading my poem, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this will do wonderful in the contest I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I like the content this. Is very soft and smooth flowing. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lala
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I think that this will do wonderful in the contest I wish you all the best and good luck to you. I like the content this. Is very soft and smooth flowing. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love, Lala
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. It's so great to be able to share my poems with others.
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I agree!