Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "haiku (the power of prayer)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dean
You always come up with something that draws my full attention about the power of prayer
Yes prayer r turns ordinary mortals into men of power. It brings power. It brings fire. It brings rain. It brings life. It brings God.
Gert
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Hello Dean
You always come up with something that draws my full attention about the power of prayer
Yes prayer r turns ordinary mortals into men of power. It brings power. It brings fire. It brings rain. It brings life. It brings God.
Gert
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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All those things and healing too, Gert. At least sometimes.
Thanks so much for reading...:)
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You are welcome Dean
Now guess it's my turn to add to Gypsy's book about what a prayer can do
Gert
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You, or someone else's.
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O course it will be mine own thoughts.
Why did you ask
or someone else's?
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Turn, Gert.
Your turn, or someone else's.
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Hi Dean
Oh it's my turn getting ready to post one
Gert
Please ignore my PM message to you.
I must of misread what you were saying.
Forgive me
Gert
Comment from DR DIP
To those who believe in an all mighty being the power of prayer would be a formidable force in their eyes. To say it is the defeater of death is a big call. Not everyone's prayers are answered and I see major tragedy and heartache in the world that prayer hasn't resolved. Prayer is a major test of faith. If you have found that in God that must be a wonderful thing.
respectfully dip
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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To those who believe in an all mighty being the power of prayer would be a formidable force in their eyes. To say it is the defeater of death is a big call. Not everyone's prayers are answered and I see major tragedy and heartache in the world that prayer hasn't resolved. Prayer is a major test of faith. If you have found that in God that must be a wonderful thing.
respectfully dip
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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It's not the catch-all, cure-all answer for everything that ails us, Dip. That's true.
But it sure don't hurt none either.
The Bible says in 1 Corinthians 15:55-57--1 Corinthians 15:55-57 (KJV)
55 O death, where is thy sting? O grave, where is thy victory?
56 The sting of death is sin; and the strength of sin is the law.
57 But thanks be to God, which giveth us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ.
Thanks for the review.
~Dean
Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
VERY AWSOME YOUR SOUND EFFECTS ARE AMAZING
GLAD TO BE BACK AND READING SINCE YOU ARE ONE OF MY
FAVORITES. YOU NEVER LET A READER DOWN THATS FOR SURE
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VERY AWSOME YOUR SOUND EFFECTS ARE AMAZING
GLAD TO BE BACK AND READING SINCE YOU ARE ONE OF MY
FAVORITES. YOU NEVER LET A READER DOWN THATS FOR SURE
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
Comment from damommy
Absolutely! The power of prayers is indeed formidable. It can move mountains. Certainly the 'mountains' in our life.
Love the sound effect.
By the way, I got my Mikesell's potato chips today. You're right. They are delicious.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Absolutely! The power of prayers is indeed formidable. It can move mountains. Certainly the 'mountains' in our life.
Love the sound effect.
By the way, I got my Mikesell's potato chips today. You're right. They are delicious.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Yay, I'm so glad you got 'em, Yvonne!
I told ya, didn't I? There's not another potato chip in the entire good Ol' US of A as good as a Mikesell's.
Thanks so much for your review as well. I appreciate it.
~Dean :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend I agree with the power of prayer at this time a close friend of mine is going through chemo I pray each day that all will be well after his treatment hopefully its working well done regards Jill
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Oh yes my friend I agree with the power of prayer at this time a close friend of mine is going through chemo I pray each day that all will be well after his treatment hopefully its working well done regards Jill
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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People underestimate the power and effect prayer can have, Jill.
My Grandma Goff on my mother's side had a brain scan that revealed a rather large mass at the age of 68.
Everyone at church prayed for her right up until she was scheduled to go back for an MRI.
Once the hospital did the MRI, there was no mass to be found.
She lived to the ripe old age of 96!
Prayer can do wonders and work miracles.
I'm sure of it.
Blessings, and thanks for your review.
~Dean :-)))
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Presented wonderfully Dean, with a message that is absolutely tremendous.
Love the middle line which glues your words together fantastically well.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Presented wonderfully Dean, with a message that is absolutely tremendous.
Love the middle line which glues your words together fantastically well.
Mitchell
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thanks a million for reading and responding to this, Mitchell.
I deeply appreciate your comments, my friend.
~Dean :-)))
Comment from Thal1959
Another goodie - with plenty of alliterations. A pleasing change from your usual subject matter - although I noticed you couldn't help but resort to the usual creepy pic.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Another goodie - with plenty of alliterations. A pleasing change from your usual subject matter - although I noticed you couldn't help but resort to the usual creepy pic.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Well, yeah, just a little bit, LOL.
Thanks for your review, David. :)
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Of corpse, you're welcome.
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Hahaha... :)
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Oh you are so right/. Prayers defeats everything because it proves to the unbeliever there is something he is missing.lol I love it. Nice imagery and great last line
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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Oh you are so right/. Prayers defeats everything because it proves to the unbeliever there is something he is missing.lol I love it. Nice imagery and great last line
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading, Barb.
Much obliged. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Darlin',
This is a very spooky Haiku Club Challenge #4 Prayer entry. I love the presentation and your well chosen words gives the death poem a dark feeling. I would not expect any less from you. You are a wonderful haikuist with a very unique style. Great alliteration. Well done.
Gypsy hugs
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Hello, Darlin',
This is a very spooky Haiku Club Challenge #4 Prayer entry. I love the presentation and your well chosen words gives the death poem a dark feeling. I would not expect any less from you. You are a wonderful haikuist with a very unique style. Great alliteration. Well done.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment Written 10-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading, Gypsy, darlin'.
Much obliged. ;)
