Haiku/Haiga
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Comment from BOO ghost
Nice presentation! Summer love so sweet! yeah, can think of a thousand things about these words. metaphors. Be bad is there is a streaker on the loose. Cocoon opened and revealed. Not sure how I missed this one? Love your word choices, artistic and creative. Good job Lion King. roar! rrrooaaarrr!
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Nice presentation! Summer love so sweet! yeah, can think of a thousand things about these words. metaphors. Be bad is there is a streaker on the loose. Cocoon opened and revealed. Not sure how I missed this one? Love your word choices, artistic and creative. Good job Lion King. roar! rrrooaaarrr!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2017
Comment from F. Wehr3
I think it spells out summer love quite well. I enjoyed the take on the cocoon. This is very you and that's a good thing. Nicely done!
Take care,
Russell
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I think it spells out summer love quite well. I enjoyed the take on the cocoon. This is very you and that's a good thing. Nicely done!
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
Comment from rama devi
Good job. True to for. Quite erotic with the accompanying picture amplifying the subtle metaphorical intent. Superb word economy and alliteration. It feels, to me, like the word open needs an 's'.
Cocoon opens
fine single-word satori. Clever.
Warm Smiles,
rd
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Good job. True to for. Quite erotic with the accompanying picture amplifying the subtle metaphorical intent. Superb word economy and alliteration. It feels, to me, like the word open needs an 's'.
Cocoon opens
fine single-word satori. Clever.
Warm Smiles,
rd
Comment Written 09-Jul-2017
