Act of Endurance
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Comment from mkflood
I interesting story. This cartoon was just one of the characters thinking he was seeing death coming for him. The costume guy told him to relax it was for a Halloween party. There is another that may work with this story titled "you got the wrong date". Still good job on the story holding the reader's interest. I do thank you for selecting my work. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Good job and thanks again... Mkflood
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I interesting story. This cartoon was just one of the characters thinking he was seeing death coming for him. The costume guy told him to relax it was for a Halloween party. There is another that may work with this story titled "you got the wrong date". Still good job on the story holding the reader's interest. I do thank you for selecting my work. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Good job and thanks again... Mkflood
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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I thank you.for your pleasant appeal for the Reaper illustrated, art filled with colors rather dark and fear. Thanking you for your generous rate and delighting comments about this write.
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i make available almost 900 illustrations of a wide range of topics to you writers her on Fanstory. you have my blessings to use them here..wink.
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this nicely written poem. I think that the content is very strong and powerful and the emotions are easily felt. The other duration is great. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lala
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this nicely written poem. I think that the content is very strong and powerful and the emotions are easily felt. The other duration is great. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lala
Comment Written 08-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Glad you found some interest in this written effort, thanking you for your generous rate and touching thoughts.
Comment from frierajac
This seems strange and I could not get a grip on the overall meaning. That may be your intention, who knows.( I wonder what you mean by the word,tare'?) and seems like a nice gloss on the subject of death.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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This seems strange and I could not get a grip on the overall meaning. That may be your intention, who knows.( I wonder what you mean by the word,tare'?) and seems like a nice gloss on the subject of death.
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Comment Written 07-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2017
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Tare might not have been appropriate word usage but its the subtraction of addition weight from product to ship. Thanking you for your generous rate and reply about this lump.
