Comment from KL Williams

Excellent

This just breaks my heart, bless all those souls. The poor were treated so badly, and left to die. I think you did a nice job of telling their story in a poem. It must have been a terrifying time for those people. Thank you for sharing, and best of luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

Thanks so much. Your kind review is well appreciated.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the Titanic and its early grave on its first voyage. Many lives were lost including for fifty children which is very sad and heartbreaking.

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

Thanks much, Sandra. JoAnn

Comment from B.B. Rose

Excellent

Oh, how I wanted a happier ending, but life ain't fair and the Titanic disaster was an example, except that the rich, as you have so well pointed out, didn't suffer near the losses of the poor. Thanks for a well done story poem.

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2017

Thank you so much for reading and your kind review.