Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

Your 15 syllable haiku appears to meet the criteria and is well-presented.
the fire blazing red
does not char the passions
they just rage on
Thankfully, it does not char the passions! An interesting thought.
Nicole

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you very much .

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes my friend this is well written I liked the picture you have chosen it completes the meaning of the poem good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

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Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Poet,

This is a nice departure from the others poems I have read in this contest, in that the topic seems to be more about a fire in the heart than an a physical fire that warms. A nice offering -- good luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

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Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

This is a wonderful Haiku poem.
Which describes passion with such imagery.
The alliteration is fantastic which strengthens your words beautifully.
and a lovely picture to accompany
Mitchell

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

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Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged & formatting is wonderful. Good flow. Under- standable. The theme was good. The artwork complemented your poem.

There was no SPAG. No room for improvement.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you very much.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello, my friend,

I like your haiku... it's very poetic.... romantic...

the fire bla/zing red
does not char the pa/ssions
they just rage on...................................good syllable count

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you very much.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. The red glow of the fire is blazing without charting the passion but just continue raging through the night. A romantic evening at the can.no fire.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks the feelings at the visual impact of the fire blazing red and how it reacts like that of not charring the passions of the speaker (viewer) and how they rage on naturally; I liked.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you very much.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a fine entry for the contest
with correct syllables to the form
Excellent imagery of the fire with red and char
and a solid third line
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing your 'fire' haiku for the contest. Within your limited syllable count, you've given us a sense of the flames of love. I like the image of 'raging passion.' Good luck in the contest, however - the contest rules state a white background with black font - your piece doesn't conform

~patty~

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 Comment Written 07-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Thank you very much and also for pointing out the mistake .I had corrected it .I was not keeping well.hence the delay in replying.