Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Patty

= Great interpretation of the artwork.
= I enjoyed your poem a lot. Well done.
= As well, your formatting is complimentary.
= Remember, though, next challenge, don't post until Monday morning. (*<*)

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Hi Jax; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,

~patty~

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for introducing me to this interesting new form, Patty! I like the rushing home sense and repeated first line emphasizes the continual damage of the rains. Alas, poor shoes! For the line:
But my buildings in sight (I'd suggest the contraction building's as you intend 'is')

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review of this fun piece. I'm glad you enjoyed the imagery.

~patty~

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

You did well I forget where you are America possibly? Loss and Sauce would only rhyme in USA hehe. Loved it hope you do well. The picture was great as well. No spags.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Hi there; yes, I am indeed from America, so loss and sauce do rhyme - what is the pronunciation down under?

Thank you so much for reading and your continued support of my work,

~patty~

reply by Sankey on 03-Jul-2017

Loss is same sauce is like sorce no emphasis on r as in "Up Over"

reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Ah - good to know; thanks for getting back to me on this