Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "haiku (art of seduction)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
19 total reviews
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Excellent Haiku your words tell it all. Oh the tricks we females have up our sleeve. I can just imagine a cunning 15yr old girls coming up with this plan.
I have just posted a Haiku for this challenge hope I went about it the correct way.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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Excellent Haiku your words tell it all. Oh the tricks we females have up our sleeve. I can just imagine a cunning 15yr old girls coming up with this plan.
I have just posted a Haiku for this challenge hope I went about it the correct way.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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thank you very much for the lovely review.
Comment from EricBrady
Yes, I do believe that would work on just about every 15-16 year old boy. LOL. Great Haiku. You have captured a moment of summer fun (flirtation) perfectly. Excellent aha moment and I love the story behind the poem.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Yes, I do believe that would work on just about every 15-16 year old boy. LOL. Great Haiku. You have captured a moment of summer fun (flirtation) perfectly. Excellent aha moment and I love the story behind the poem.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, well!!!! today on the beach if your top came off no one would know the difference...no modesty today...they wear a walnut cut in half for a top...and a leaf on a string for the bottom...hummmm...love your poem sweet girl...and the perfect picture...love to ya you...and ahave a wonderful 4th of July...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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HI Gypsy, well!!!! today on the beach if your top came off no one would know the difference...no modesty today...they wear a walnut cut in half for a top...and a leaf on a string for the bottom...hummmm...love your poem sweet girl...and the perfect picture...love to ya you...and ahave a wonderful 4th of July...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July! luv ya :)
gypsy
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you are so welcome...always...love xxoo
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes I liked this it made me smile if this happened to me id run as fast as I could though very original my friend I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Oh yes I liked this it made me smile if this happened to me id run as fast as I could though very original my friend I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hola Gitana, bless you. Yeah, I bet it worked an he became your beau of the summer. What we don't do to get that special attention. I liked your haiku a lot. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Hola Gitana, bless you. Yeah, I bet it worked an he became your beau of the summer. What we don't do to get that special attention. I liked your haiku a lot. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Gracias guapa :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Another of your cleverly thoughtout haikus, Gypsy -
you are the Queen of Haikus - always most impressive.
I once got snatched up by a strong wave in Portugal as I was trying to get to the beach, and it took me off my feet again and again, as there was shingle beneath my feet, which didn't help - when my husband came down to rescue me, my bikini top was up round my neck and full of shingle and my breasts bouncing up and down with my efforts to right myself - he just whipped it off and picked me up - that was in his stronger days, of course. Your picture and haikus refreshed the memory.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Another of your cleverly thoughtout haikus, Gypsy -
you are the Queen of Haikus - always most impressive.
I once got snatched up by a strong wave in Portugal as I was trying to get to the beach, and it took me off my feet again and again, as there was shingle beneath my feet, which didn't help - when my husband came down to rescue me, my bikini top was up round my neck and full of shingle and my breasts bouncing up and down with my efforts to right myself - he just whipped it off and picked me up - that was in his stronger days, of course. Your picture and haikus refreshed the memory.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Wow, Mr. Snowdon sounds like a keeper... that is so romantic :) I am glad you had a nice memory. Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
She presents herself as a victim of a mishap, and only she knows how brilliantly her plan succeeded. Perhaps though, her mischievous smile gave her away.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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She presents herself as a victim of a mishap, and only she knows how brilliantly her plan succeeded. Perhaps though, her mischievous smile gave her away.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Chrissy710
Ha Ha Gypsy, I bet not only the 15 year old girls try this trick LOL. A fun Haiku for this topic. yoir memory served you well for this one. Great Satori Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Ha Ha Gypsy, I bet not only the 15 year old girls try this trick LOL. A fun Haiku for this topic. yoir memory served you well for this one. Great Satori Cheers Christine
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Cheers,
Gypsy
Comment from Rasmine
LOL! This is a funny story. I think any guy would react to that. :D
My favorite parts:
her bikini top
comes off and she runs to shore--
I like the satori, also.
Keep writing!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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LOL! This is a funny story. I think any guy would react to that. :D
My favorite parts:
her bikini top
comes off and she runs to shore--
I like the satori, also.
Keep writing!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Hitcher
Nice! I think at 15 you were very brave and daring. I will however be telling my daughter who turns 15 tomorrow-4th July that that ain't the way to go, ha ha.
This one made me smile friend, well done!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Nice! I think at 15 you were very brave and daring. I will however be telling my daughter who turns 15 tomorrow-4th July that that ain't the way to go, ha ha.
This one made me smile friend, well done!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my haiku, you are very kind.
cheers :)
Gypsy
