2017 Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Picasso's Painting"A collection of my poems
42 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
This is lovely. So poetic.
I like the concept you've come up with of a picture hugging the wall. I'd never have thought of that myself.
I also like the playfulness of the word bare that can be understood in two different ways.
Thanks for sharing. Very imaginative.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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This is lovely. So poetic.
I like the concept you've come up with of a picture hugging the wall. I'd never have thought of that myself.
I also like the playfulness of the word bare that can be understood in two different ways.
Thanks for sharing. Very imaginative.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, I appreciate that you took the time to read my poem.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've managed to pen a good one.
It consists of three lines and has a syllable count of 5-7-5
'Picasso's Painting' meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
The image shown supports the topic discussed. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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You've managed to pen a good one.
It consists of three lines and has a syllable count of 5-7-5
'Picasso's Painting' meets the requirements of the contest and makes a good entry.
The image shown supports the topic discussed. The background goes well with the art and color of font chosen.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 05-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2017
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thank you very much for the lovely review.
Comment from EricBrady
A perfect entry for the contest. I love the presentation and great alliteration with the P and W. The last line is so perfect for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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A perfect entry for the contest. I love the presentation and great alliteration with the P and W. The last line is so perfect for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Interesting painting and good presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the image of hugging the wall.
-The last line is quite effective by
commenting on the nature of the painting
with very good imagery.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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-Interesting painting and good presentation.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the image of hugging the wall.
-The last line is quite effective by
commenting on the nature of the painting
with very good imagery.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
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You are quite welcome. Hope you had a good 4th, too.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Nice simple touch of alliteration like a dab of blue paint
Excellent use of clever imagery that Pablo would enjoy
and a fine "satori" line worthy of the "Blue Rose"
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the contest
Nice simple touch of alliteration like a dab of blue paint
Excellent use of clever imagery that Pablo would enjoy
and a fine "satori" line worthy of the "Blue Rose"
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Hola Guapa. Eso si me ha gustado mucho. It's a wonderful 5-7-5. It's so expressive and the imagery is great. I wish you all the best in the contest. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Hola Guapa. Eso si me ha gustado mucho. It's a wonderful 5-7-5. It's so expressive and the imagery is great. I wish you all the best in the contest. Un abrazo de tu amiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Great poem, Gypsy. A great relief to see the new subject for the Haiku club challenge, I have my new list of seasonal references so should be able to get a group of Haiku together. Love Picasso's painting. It was a good choice, Giddy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Great poem, Gypsy. A great relief to see the new subject for the Haiku club challenge, I have my new list of seasonal references so should be able to get a group of Haiku together. Love Picasso's painting. It was a good choice, Giddy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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thank you very much my friend, happy 4th of July!
gypsy
Comment from pipersfancy
As I am going to an exhibit of Picasso's works at the Winnipeg Art Gallery tomorrow, I had to stop by to read your poem--and I'm glad that I did! Very clever and enjoyable!
pf
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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As I am going to an exhibit of Picasso's works at the Winnipeg Art Gallery tomorrow, I had to stop by to read your poem--and I'm glad that I did! Very clever and enjoyable!
pf
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Enjoy the exhibit! Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Again well done my friend you never cease to amaze me with your original ideas using this form I enjoyed again well done my friend regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Again well done my friend you never cease to amaze me with your original ideas using this form I enjoyed again well done my friend regards Jill
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from TAB_that's me
Not only is this a great 5-7-5 poem in perfect form but also a great senyru/haiku. Great satori.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Not only is this a great 5-7-5 poem in perfect form but also a great senyru/haiku. Great satori.
Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 03-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy hugs
