Comment from Misternubcakes

Excellent

I love it,
You my friend are creative.
Every intrinsic with what is just given and it is very wonderful to read and simply appreciate it.

This can definitely can be independent piece serving as story intro or outro.
I just wish there was more. I have a sense that are some missing pieces, but that is just me. I just love nonetheless.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Misternubacakes:

Thank you for your comments and review, I think (LOL)
I was wondering why I couldn't get a 5 star?

Best regards and thanks again.

gnewton75

reply by Misternubcakes on 29-Jun-2017

Sorry. I quite new at this site,
I getting used to the rating system and how certain things function. Do forgive me, I updated the my rating.

But yeah Still really Great. *thumbs ups*

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

thank you for sharing this piece for the Faith Poetry contest. Within your lines of poetry, you have given us the food in the garden used to represent homage to the Lord.

Well done and good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017

Thank Patty for the nice review and comments.

I appreciate you very much.

gnewton75