Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hey Patty. This is a new form for me as I've never even seen one before. I do say however, that the subject is a little disturbing. Everyone is capable and entitled to be loved and to love without having to be concerned if that love is returned. You did great on this one my friend. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I believe some people just don't believe they are lovable, and have a difficult time accepting the love given so freely,

~patty~

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

kind of a till death do us part love affair friend. One needs reassurance that they are the light that the other craves. The other then calms the troubled mind of the doubting lover. It is a cool concept and I did enjoy it!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review. This was a fun write,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written katauta suite. I believe this is the way the katauta should be. Cryptic notes between two lovers. We sometimes feel doubtful of our own abilities and it is comforting when someone close tells us we have nothing to fear.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you for the lovely review of this piece. Your encouraging words mean a great deal to me,

~patty~

Comment from Sallyo

Exceptional

Never encountered that form before but to the best of my knowledge you carried it off magnificently. I love dialogue poems and this to-and-fro is a complete romance in just a few lines.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I had a good time putting this one together,

~patty~
ps; thank you so much for the shining sixth star

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Well done. I really enjoyed this. Another lesson in yet another poetic form. I also loved the honouring of our Saviour in there as well. Not to mention the lovely picture.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I enjoyed writing this poem - it was a challenge to make the lines come out just right,

~patty~

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This is such a beautiful, honest poem. I like the way it portrays two voices--his and hers. She has her doubts and he is constantly reassuring. To me, it seems as if this pair is well suited.
Nicole

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi Nicole; thank you so much for your kind and lovely review. I had a good time putting this piece together.

~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hello again Patty:

Thank you for sharing this lesson on the Katauta poem. Your poem is an excellent example for me on how this poem is written and the poem itself presents an interesting and realistic conversation between two lovers. NICE...

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi Tier; I'm glad to have shared this poetic form with you. It was a fun and interesting write. Thank you for your lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Ann Philips

Excellent

This is a very interesting poetry form. One thing I really enjoy about fanstory is the various new poetry forms I keep discovering. Each provides new challenges and opportunities to perfect one's writing.
You certainly provided a nice example of the form. The question and answer format is certainly successful. Being that the purpose is romance, I had an expectation of more imagery. I really liked "spirits entwine" and would have enjoyed more.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jun-2017

Hi Ann; thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I will try to put more imagery into the next poem I try. Thank you for the suggestion,

~patty~

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A striking presentation in this Katauta series. You have set up this nice poem in an easily readable form as to which one is speaking. This is an interesting style that intrigues. Good job with this. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017

Hi Marilyn; thank you so much for the wonderful review of this piece. I enjoyed writing this poem and using the poetic form to tell a story of love and reassurance,

~patty~

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a brilliant piece of poetry dear patty! i love the way you incorporate questions in the poem! i think it is very clever, unique and original! bravo my friend!
thank you for sharing!
virtual sixer..
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017

Hi Rebekka; thank you so much for the virtual six! I loved putting this piece together. The poetic form worked well and I felt it was a good vehicle for reassurance,

~patty~