Comment from JW

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this poem, Patty.

In reading it, I could not help but recall a recent post of mine where the character was having a conversation with his inner voice. JW

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. This is a conversation between two people, but one needs reassurance about their love, and the other is willing to give it,

~patty~

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired the question and answer format of this love poem. Thank you for your notes about the form and your colorful presentation, which add to our enjoyment. I enjoyed the theme of reassurance. Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi Joan; thank you so much for the lovely review of this piece,

~patty~

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

I thought it was kind of sad that one person was so insecure. I wondered why it is that if he loves her so much she feels so unlovable. Do his actions not match his words?

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi Cindy; I think there are some people that still feel unlovable - even if their partner is doing everything right,

~patty~

Comment from lalajovanoski

Excellent

Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written poem. I like the structure a lot it's very different and unique. This content is great in the structure is very smooth throughout. Thank you very much for sharing this. With love Lala

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi La La; I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. I loved working with this poetic form - it was fun to put the piece together,

~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

This is an interesting form. I like your poem content. I've always thought it is better to love wisely, one of the worst feelings in the world is having to doubt someone you thought was unquestionable.

All the best...
Bill~

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi Bill; thank you for sharing this insight. I appreciate your time to read and review,

~patty~

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

How I would respond, if given the privilege.
No one created by God is unlovable.
You can't possibly see what I see. I see a creature of God in need of love.
I don't know the depths of you, yet. That takes time.
A thought provoking premise.
Marv

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi Marv; thank you for the wonderful interpretation of the conversation between the two characters. It is often that one partner simply feels that are not lovable, and the other partner needs to give constant reassurance,

I enjoyed your review,

~patty~

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

Simple, short yet Interesting and very romantic. Love how all the doubt is answer with very sweet words. Like the ending, there are religion element in this. very good.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Exceptional

Patty, this was such a treat, a journey of want and need between two lovers, such an inspirational format that only the few would dare attempt, Patty you have done this with flying colours.......wonderful
Mitchell

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi Mitch; thank you so much for the high praise. I enjoyed putting this poem together. The chance to use dialogue between two lovers to show the emotions was challenging.

I so appreciate the lovely, shining, sixth star,

~patty~

Comment from smudge

Exceptional

I like this conversational poem. It speaks of the unconventional nature of love as told by William Shakespeare in A Midsummer Night's Dream. It gives confidence to the beloved and a reason to be for the lover.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

Hi; thank you so much for the lovely review of this poem. I had a great deal of fun putting this one together in the poetic form, and I was happy with the results.

Your exceptional review of this piece gives me confidence and encouragement,

~patty~

Comment from Linda Hughes

Excellent

This a lovely romantic poem. And I must say how wonderfully crafted it is to meet the requirements of a katauta. The kind of love in the poem is what most people desire, and those in love, after reading the poem, may just feel absolutely complete.

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,

~patty~