Haiku Club Challenges, Book II
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "haiku (harsh tongues can cut deep)"an anthology of haiku written by fanstory poets
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Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Words that ring so true Dean, the way we shape our children is the way we are shaping their journey through life...so many things that happen as a child stay for life......excellent job my friend.
Mitchell
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Words that ring so true Dean, the way we shape our children is the way we are shaping their journey through life...so many things that happen as a child stay for life......excellent job my friend.
Mitchell
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for weighing in on this haiku with your thoughts, Mitchell. I deeply appreciate the positive feedback.
Take care.
~Dean :}
Comment from hari anand
Words wielded to wound. ..I have no words to define superiority of the haiku here...the creativity ...extraordinary. The picture here leaves a deep impact just like these perfect phrase.
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Words wielded to wound. ..I have no words to define superiority of the haiku here...the creativity ...extraordinary. The picture here leaves a deep impact just like these perfect phrase.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for weighing in on this haiku with your thoughts, hargunanand, and for the shining sixth star as well. I deeply appreciate the positive feedback and I'm very glad you liked it.
Take care.
~Dean :}
Comment from MizKat
Hi Dean,
You sure are great at writing poetry. This is another one that was
interesting to read. How wonderful that you made "All Time Best".
Kat
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Hi Dean,
You sure are great at writing poetry. This is another one that was
interesting to read. How wonderful that you made "All Time Best".
Kat
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Comment from webfoot
Yes words do wound but I think we have to be careful of what we don't say, more - just from personal experience.
A very beautiful presentation, Dean
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Yes words do wound but I think we have to be careful of what we don't say, more - just from personal experience.
A very beautiful presentation, Dean
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for weighing in on this haiku with your thoughts, and for the shining sixth star as well, Webfoot.
I agree, it is much better to walk away than to say something in anger to anyone, much less to a spouse or to your child.
I deeply appreciate the positive feedback and I'm very glad you liked it.
Take care.
~Dean :}
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you are very welcome Dean
Comment from TAB_that's me
There is certainly a lot of alliteration going on in your haiku:) The cruelness of the tongue can be horror for sure. Great overall satori.
Teresa
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There is certainly a lot of alliteration going on in your haiku:) The cruelness of the tongue can be horror for sure. Great overall satori.
Teresa
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Comment from frierajac
I don't know where you keep getting these amazing illustrations !? We discus at
home the issue of emotional abuse all the time. It seems there is some evidence that words are actually more damaging along with some other perps on young people, statistiscally speaking.
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I don't know where you keep getting these amazing illustrations !? We discus at
home the issue of emotional abuse all the time. It seems there is some evidence that words are actually more damaging along with some other perps on young people, statistiscally speaking.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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I have so many illustrations and animations stored up in my Photobucket library, frierajac. I'll probably never be able to use them all.
When I was young I would have much rather received a spanking than to have one of my parents yell at me in anger.
It's probably that way for many kids still today.
Thanks very much for reading.
~Dean
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
You are so right - your words ring with truth -
and there's those who need to engage brain
before speaking them.
a clever use of words, Dean - and so well presented -
Margaret
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You are so right - your words ring with truth -
and there's those who need to engage brain
before speaking them.
a clever use of words, Dean - and so well presented -
Margaret
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great W alliteration in this descriptive Haiku Dean and your words are so true. Words can hurt and can sometimes be long remembered well after the speaker has forgotten them. Very good, really agree with this one.
cheers,
valda
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Great W alliteration in this descriptive Haiku Dean and your words are so true. Words can hurt and can sometimes be long remembered well after the speaker has forgotten them. Very good, really agree with this one.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Comment from dragonpoet
The 'w' alliteration at the end of the second line and all through the last describe the affects of a bully's words well. I was picked on in high school, so I can attest this is how it feels.
Keep writing
Joan
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The 'w' alliteration at the end of the second line and all through the last describe the affects of a bully's words well. I was picked on in high school, so I can attest this is how it feels.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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My pleasure, Dean.
Joan
Comment from rtobaygo
Good morning, Dean
I don't know which has the greater impact, the visceral images of the poem or the picture. Either way well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
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Good morning, Dean
I don't know which has the greater impact, the visceral images of the poem or the picture. Either way well done!
Take care and stay safe,
Ray
Comment Written 28-Jun-2017
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Thank you very much for weighing in on this haiku with your thoughts, Ray, and for the shining sixth star as well. I deeply appreciate the positive feedback and I'm very glad you liked it.
Take care.
~Dean :}