The Twilight Zone!
My shitty past life.18 total reviews
Comment from country ranch writer
Seems a bit strange to read about a deranged visit to the twilight zone. Memories of dread and doom following along on your visit to the lunnie bin. Seems a vacation for you along the way.. Relaxed now and ready to meet like head on.
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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Seems a bit strange to read about a deranged visit to the twilight zone. Memories of dread and doom following along on your visit to the lunnie bin. Seems a vacation for you along the way.. Relaxed now and ready to meet like head on.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jun-2017
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"Thanks my dear...
"Mental Illness is a big problem today in the US. as well as all countries.'
"Calling a mental facility 'A Lunnie Bin.'
{In my eyes}
"Is Ludacris and cruel in that respect."
'From Nervous breakdowns to the more serious like 'Dementia,"
the Human brain simply runs out of gas...
"I know for I have dealt with this from...
"Institutions to medications since the loss of my Wife and child in '03."
Ricky1024.
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Sorry if You thought I was unfeelingq
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I can really relate to this Ricky in so many ways....this is good work....it is work that will help people for the better and I know you are a kind and good person so thanks for sharing something that can resonate with people. You might be helping someone like me that feels worthless and helpless, you might be saving a life with your words, and that is what Jesus sends us out in the world to do. Very well done kind regards Meia xx
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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I can really relate to this Ricky in so many ways....this is good work....it is work that will help people for the better and I know you are a kind and good person so thanks for sharing something that can resonate with people. You might be helping someone like me that feels worthless and helpless, you might be saving a life with your words, and that is what Jesus sends us out in the world to do. Very well done kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks, 'Miss Me of Ah.'
'The Ricky of Ah.'
"Straight From the Heart?"
By Some Dumb Shit!
Written way back in '03!
<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><>2003<><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><
"I was never very 'Religeous' growing up."
{that was Granny}
"Even got married in my house and no Church...
"Best man from "The Adams Family" named "Lurch!"
"Tee, Hee, Hee!"
"Miss Me-of -me!!"
...
"In that Year of Our Lord Jesus Christ or Satan 2003...
'The shit hit the fan for me."
...
"As you are well aware...
"I was no longer here or there."
"But with my Son...
{Not my Wife}
"Life was interrupted...
"And, so corrupted..
"And for Two, Long, Years of ...
"What The Fuck!"
"All these tears?"
....
"I awoke and cursed, awoke and cursed Christ
for not taking me and making EVERYTHING...
"More nice...
'Then an Apathy, Apology of Apoplexy."
...
"It wasn't me or Christ or even Satan's fault but...
'Fate mate, altered me?
"AND, that damned 'Miss Destiny'
{Makes your Life a miserable Mess}
"Got the very best...
"Of me in '05, 04, and '03.'
...
'Then at the end of '06...
"Just when I stopped thinking of ways...
"To do myself in...
"With a Bag of 'Felix the Cat Tricks...
'A Pure and Perpetual, Everlasting, Sin...
...
"Then them old...
'Suicidal Thoughts' begin...
"I put my sleeping Partner away....
{A Butcher Knife!]
'And, because I broke up with my woman, I so loved...
...
"To much to stand...
'First my Only Son, then my sick and stealing away Wife...
"My woman Nancy, My Career of 36 years, and almost my House...
"It was time for my life!"
...
Make no mistake...
"No not Miss Butcher Knife but Master Serated Steak knife!"
"NOT ONCE...
"First twice to the Chest...
{Hit the valve}
"And almost bled inside to Death but...
{What I do Best}
"Then, after no success...
"In Dire and Unhuman Distress...
...
"Not once, nor twice, but thrice to the Neck...
"Hoping to Heck to hit that Juggle.....
{And missed it in my stupid Neck!}
"And when that blood went away..
"And it was all said and done....
"What more can I say?'
...
"But a bottle of Depacote for this...
"Latter Day Saint Priest DOPE!"
"Today?"
...
"Has all the pain went away?
"The scars have faded, Fate at best,...
"And, Destiny still exists...
"On my Quest...
"But I do my very best...
"To map it all down...
"A new start...
"Straight from my Heart...
....
"And yes, for this "latter Day Saint Priest Dope...
"With the latter Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ...
"I'm still here but there's always a ROPE?"
LOL!
That's the ...
'Me Ah of me!'
Ricky...
Comment from mpetrangelo1
This was a hard poem to read for those who do not walk the other side of the tracks.
I do understand the drift, and it had deep feelings showing a lot of pain. You expressed this very well. It paints a picture of the agony of those caught up in the world of drugs and emotiions.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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This was a hard poem to read for those who do not walk the other side of the tracks.
I do understand the drift, and it had deep feelings showing a lot of pain. You expressed this very well. It paints a picture of the agony of those caught up in the world of drugs and emotiions.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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True.
Mental Depressions from severe, psychotic, to ..
Sezechso Expressive await rooms in Mental Hospitals...
'all over this shitty world.
Thanks but been there done that to many...
FUCKING TIMES TO COUNT! Ricky1024.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about poet's frustrated solitary living in the twilight zone, everything lost, no friends, no family, no darling, no happiness, no peace, only comments, luck; who cares; I liked.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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This speaks about poet's frustrated solitary living in the twilight zone, everything lost, no friends, no family, no darling, no happiness, no peace, only comments, luck; who cares; I liked.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Turn on the Light Alcreator,
You got that right...
Thanks,
Ricky1024.
Comment from smbau
The poet describes major milestones of a persons life, and his life's companions. Sadly despite his company of drugs, wife, cell phones and pets, still feels alone. Sad too is when he goes through the loss of his child and wife. What strikes me is the poet use of '153 episodes", reminds me of "153 fish" in Jesus after resurrection story with the disciples. Twilight Zone title, the picture, the background and font colors add value the content of the poem. Great flow of content and connection from one event to the other.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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The poet describes major milestones of a persons life, and his life's companions. Sadly despite his company of drugs, wife, cell phones and pets, still feels alone. Sad too is when he goes through the loss of his child and wife. What strikes me is the poet use of '153 episodes", reminds me of "153 fish" in Jesus after resurrection story with the disciples. Twilight Zone title, the picture, the background and font colors add value the content of the poem. Great flow of content and connection from one event to the other.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks very much smbau and read the second Twilight Zone.'
Ricky1024
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Isn't it the truth that the stranger people look and act the more they belong?
You nailed that perspective right on top of the head!
Well said and done.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Isn't it the truth that the stranger people look and act the more they belong?
You nailed that perspective right on top of the head!
Well said and done.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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That's for sharing your skeletons!
That period...{Like Yours}
Is long passed
Now for some Twilight Zone!
Ricky 1024.
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day again, mate.
Some powerful words right there. I don't know the song to which you refer, who sings it?
You are right about the suicide creeping up inside... I know it.
Good job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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G'day again, mate.
Some powerful words right there. I don't know the song to which you refer, who sings it?
You are right about the suicide creeping up inside... I know it.
Good job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks Feral.
And, Ask Boo that was where I got the idea.
Read his post with a song!
Ricky1024.
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Thanks mate. I'll check it out.
Comment from BOO ghost
OMG. This is killer. Yeah, was like one long-----spontaneous laugh. this makes my morning and my day. I can relate, ain't had the best of times either. I got two cats, you got four, damn my cats eat like dogs and I got possums and raccoons to feed. Crap, where is a nugget when you need one. You deserve one after all the hell and misery you been through which most folks would just blow their fracking brains out, you a tough dog. Wow! You wrote this quick and the mummy looks hilarious. I got to book case this unit, sorry I laugh at this, know it ain't funny bro, real life, haha, your great! BOO-tastic1
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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OMG. This is killer. Yeah, was like one long-----spontaneous laugh. this makes my morning and my day. I can relate, ain't had the best of times either. I got two cats, you got four, damn my cats eat like dogs and I got possums and raccoons to feed. Crap, where is a nugget when you need one. You deserve one after all the hell and misery you been through which most folks would just blow their fracking brains out, you a tough dog. Wow! You wrote this quick and the mummy looks hilarious. I got to book case this unit, sorry I laugh at this, know it ain't funny bro, real life, haha, your great! BOO-tastic1
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2017
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Thanks Boo!
"Boo Berry Cereal with me and...
"Casper at my place in Hell at seven sharp!
Bring a cat!
LOL!
Ricky....
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Okie dokie. Got an ark of critters to bring. BOO berries are my favorite.
