Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is a beautifully illustrated monostich. I think your one-line poem means that when we meet the right person, we click. We seem to recognize each other when we meet and instinctively know it's the right person for us. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Monostich Poem Entry.
Heart entwines with a click...
"True Love lasts knot...
Bound and chained in pain...
You see...
Nothing lasts forever and...
"Only One, Single, Red, Rose."
Frozen...
Blackened stem...
Within the mist...
One bloom...
Must resist...
Good Luck.
Ricky 1024.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya

Comment from Charmisa Parker

Excellent

That is so true! I love the poem and I love how when two people meet up and fall in love, there is a, "sudden spark," between them, and I love this poem reflects on that.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2017

Thanks for reading zanya