JOURNEY OF THE NEW AGE GODDESS
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Only by day"A series of poems written in a particular style .
7 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Love this. An important message for me, and to all...that everything, every battle, every victory, is only day-by-day. A creed for life. Blessings....
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Love this. An important message for me, and to all...that everything, every battle, every victory, is only day-by-day. A creed for life. Blessings....
Comment Written 24-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2017
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Yes, Irish Rain, it was and is my Creed, my Mantra for Life. Both in bad times to get me through. But ESPECIALLY in Good Times, ' Carpe Diem ', that's what I do THEN!:) not enough time in one short day or 2...or even a week....or now it's a year for me... they zip away so fast - do you know what???? I woke up one day and I was 70!!!!!!!!!***** Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttt!!! I gasped, HOW DID that happen????
Blessings always accepted with open heart, Anita.
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Love this..have an AWESOME week Miss Anita!!!
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this part of your journey out of the dark with us. I love the main character of the poem - which I'm assuming is you - as she steps delicately along the path.
Well done,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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thank you for sharing this part of your journey out of the dark with us. I love the main character of the poem - which I'm assuming is you - as she steps delicately along the path.
Well done,
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Thanks patty :) HA! You think I've dressed myself up in gorgeous gowns and stuff..... Hmmmm..... lets see.
'Delicately stepping', I Iike that - instead of 'it's like walking on glass :) Hope I can find all the 'JNAG's as' I marked them in my journals and bits of paper, or I'll have to start inventing, oh *******!!!!!!! , Anita
Comment from Bloviator
I loved this poem, Anio. The yellow background added to the effect of the image of the sun as light. The piece had a nice rhythm through the stanzas, easily moving you along in the story, effortlessly. Nice use of words to convey a "thousand points of light."
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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I loved this poem, Anio. The yellow background added to the effect of the image of the sun as light. The piece had a nice rhythm through the stanzas, easily moving you along in the story, effortlessly. Nice use of words to convey a "thousand points of light."
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Bloviator you have no idea what a 6 star is like for someone new to 'creative writing' like I am. Thank you from a deep place from within me. I was an academic for 20 years, and that's how I wrote. Nothing creative or imaginative there. I wanted to " be a writer when I grew up " just like everyone else. Now I'm 70 and have emerged from 14 years of 'nowhere land' ( chronic illness, heart attack, depression ....) and been hurled by the Universe back into being Alive. What I'm posting is what I wrote at times when I was lucid, or before those bad times and I'm writing now too.
I really don't know 'where' poems like this 'come from' and I'm scared I won't be able to find my way back there :)
I'm so glad you 'got ' this poem. It did its work and that makes me feel good. Anita
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this poem I found it to be interesting and I like the structure and flow throughout I like the last stanza A lot the alliteration is great thank you for sharing this
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Hello friend I really enjoyed reading this poem I found it to be interesting and I like the structure and flow throughout I like the last stanza A lot the alliteration is great thank you for sharing this
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2017
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Hello again, lalajovanoski - ( I love to write your name because I say it aloud as I type it. so pretty :) )
Thanks for reading and reviewing once again and for your specific pointers, Anita
Comment from l.raven
HI Anita, I know what depression can do to you...it is all you can do to get up the next day...I think knowing I had to take care of my kids is what kept me going...or at times I would never have gotten up...it's a long rough journeys sweet girl...I hope you are able to find them amongst your papers...I know what you are saying...I had to finally straighten mine out...LOL...very well written you...love your poem...and a perrrrfect picture...love to ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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HI Anita, I know what depression can do to you...it is all you can do to get up the next day...I think knowing I had to take care of my kids is what kept me going...or at times I would never have gotten up...it's a long rough journeys sweet girl...I hope you are able to find them amongst your papers...I know what you are saying...I had to finally straighten mine out...LOL...very well written you...love your poem...and a perrrrfect picture...love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 23-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Hello fellow traveller! I just invented things to get me through the days. I had REAL PEOPLE, like my DOG Flicka, and my FRIEND A, who never left me , not for a day. On good days I did jig-saws, and when I couldn't do that, I had a mindless routine that got me to bedtime and medications, thank the Docs for all that :)
Thanks for the comments and connections my friend - hugs and light and our blessings, Anita
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Hi Anita, I did my share of jig-saw' as well...and I love your dogs name...remind me of the series I used to watch...My Friend Flicka(horse)...I so glad you had someone to be with...you are always soooo welcome my sweet friend...big hugs back at ya...and Blessings as well...love xxoo Linda
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I didn't have kids, I had my dogs! They had to be fed, let out to pee etc. and me the same........ But I had a FRIEND, who rang everyday and CAME, EVERY DAY! He saved my life, shopped for me. cooked for me, took my dogs for a walk, made me smile when I couldn't talk. I'm still with him. He's my Carer now. I live with him, his partner, their baby and her children.... :) Love ya' back, Anita xx
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everybody needs somebody they can truly count on...that is wonderful my sweet friend...that is a true friend...love to ya Linda xxoo
Comment from Charmisa Parker
I love the picture and design that this poem has. I love the message that this poem brings. What I picked up on from my perceptive is that despite having many obstacles, you need to have the strength to endure. Great work!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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I love the picture and design that this poem has. I love the message that this poem brings. What I picked up on from my perceptive is that despite having many obstacles, you need to have the strength to endure. Great work!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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The strength to endure is exactly what's needed against this monstrous malady Charisma Parker. I'm glad that my work has conveyed that to you. It seems to have done its work. I'm so pleased. I'm new to this 'creative writing' . I was an academic for 20 years and their was nothing 'imaginative' or 'creative' allowed there!!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Anita.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice write you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed the art work you chose too. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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This is a very nice write you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed the art work you chose too. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2017
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Thank you so much Teri7 for looking and feedback. Blessings are always welcome , most of all, these flow through the Universe and Unite us All. Love, Anita.
